"Let Trixie go you oaf!" Apple Bloom's head whipped around to see Trixie being wrestled to the ground by an elderly earth pony in a butler's uniform. Despite his apparent graying mane and the fact that he was clearly better than twice Trixie's age the old stallion was game.
Wow, you really DID manage to do a Big Mac scene without mentioning his penis. I mean, the part about mares jumping his bones came close, but technically you're good. And the scene itself was awesome. You really kept the same tone and mannerisms that Luna and Big Mac had in the comic, complete with a flirty kiss at the end.
Cat's out of the bag now, though. Luna's on to Trixie, AND Trixie is imprisoned. Trixie will need all of her cunning and magical greatness to escape the tyrannical persecution of Trixie for knowing the truth! Or she might be bailed out by an absurd series of unlikely and highly amusing circumstances. I can't wait to see which one you choose!
I did however think this last chapter was a bit shorter than the others and am a bit disappointed the dialogue between Trixie and Diamond wasn't done, had a feeling that would be hilarious.
At any rate, welcome back! Hope the chapters flow going foward!
Not sure why it hasn't gotten more thumbs up, but keep up the good work!
I can't wait to learn more about the giant badgers and clockwork soldiers.
One thing I'm just a bit confused on: Did Filthy Rich's lawyers get Mayor Mare recused from the case due to personal involvement? What personal involvement? And is Rich really worried that the Mayor will be too soft on the mare who locked her in a cage for a week?
5870226 Fair enough. I can't wait to see Princess Luna confront Trixie. Not sure whether she will be more angered at Trixie for "discovering the truth" (though it seems like Trixie is only inadvertently telling the truth by lying so frequently and creatively that she tells the truth in the same way that a stopped clock is right twice a day if you check it often enough), or if she thinks Trixie is actually making progress in swaying Big Mac to her side.
So, the Romance tag has nothing to do with Trixie. I see. And what the hell did Trixie do? I know she told Apple Bloom to bump into Diamond Tiara, but what the hell happened?
I was once put in jail for assaulting my neighbor, Tom. Tom is an asshole. No one in town likes Tom - no one. Ergo, I can't seem to figure out for the life of my why I wound up in jail. It's a mystery that will likely never be solved. Just for the record, I understand that physical assault is a punishable offense, and I'm fully aware of why I went to jail... I'm just being facetious.
Yeah, that figures.
Wow, you really DID manage to do a Big Mac scene without mentioning his penis.
I mean, the part about mares jumping his bones came close, but technically you're good.
And the scene itself was awesome. You really kept the same tone and mannerisms that Luna and Big Mac had in the comic, complete with a flirty kiss at the end.
Cat's out of the bag now, though. Luna's on to Trixie, AND Trixie is imprisoned. Trixie will need all of her cunning and magical greatness to escape the tyrannical persecution of Trixie for knowing the truth!
Or she might be bailed out by an absurd series of unlikely and highly amusing circumstances.
I can't wait to see which one you choose!
5866636 I did not mean that in any sort of sexual sense
5867082 I didn't take it as such, was just a comment on the butler versus Trixie and how it went down.
5867271 Ahh. Either way, hadn't noticed the potential innuendo.
5867280 Poor Trixie, in spite of living and working with Mac, the only action she's getting is old pony.
And now lawyers are involved. This won't end well
Man I love this story, Trixie is best pony!
I did however think this last chapter was a bit shorter than the others and am a bit disappointed the dialogue between Trixie and Diamond wasn't done, had a feeling that would be hilarious.
At any rate, welcome back! Hope the chapters flow going foward!
Not sure why it hasn't gotten more thumbs up, but keep up the good work!
5868735 It is actually the third longest chapter
I can't wait to learn more about the giant badgers and clockwork soldiers.
One thing I'm just a bit confused on: Did Filthy Rich's lawyers get Mayor Mare recused from the case due to personal involvement? What personal involvement? And is Rich really worried that the Mayor will be too soft on the mare who locked her in a cage for a week?
5870123 Ties to the Apple Family and the fact that she was about to let her off easily. Again, even if the last time it was by proxy through Twilight.
And no he's not, but it makes for a good excuse on paper even if she was planning to do the exact opposite of being biased against Trixie.
5870226 Fair enough. I can't wait to see Princess Luna confront Trixie. Not sure whether she will be more angered at Trixie for "discovering the truth" (though it seems like Trixie is only inadvertently telling the truth by lying so frequently and creatively that she tells the truth in the same way that a stopped clock is right twice a day if you check it often enough), or if she thinks Trixie is actually making progress in swaying Big Mac to her side.
So, the Romance tag has nothing to do with Trixie. I see. And what the hell did Trixie do? I know she told Apple Bloom to bump into Diamond Tiara, but what the hell happened?
Thrown in Jail, huh? I can relate to that...
I was once put in jail for assaulting my neighbor, Tom.
Tom is an asshole.
No one in town likes Tom - no one.
Ergo, I can't seem to figure out for the life of my why I wound up in jail.
It's a mystery that will likely never be solved.
Just for the record, I understand that physical assault is a punishable offense, and I'm fully aware of why I went to jail... I'm just being facetious.
Keep up the good work.
Can someone please explain to me why Diamond Tiara's butler started kicking Trixie's flank and why Trixie is in jail?
Not as funny as the other chapters but still good.