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Looks like this part came out well.
That was fun to read. Great job.
fun read wonder how Talon's gonna be for the rest of the games. Is she gonna try something to get Pinkie's secret? Also it looks the the ball was in Brass Scale's... court.
... I'll go to the corner now for that horrible pun.
The content was on point but the editing needs some tpuch ups here and there.
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Point them out plz?
Sent TO your dragon lord
if YOU'LL excuse us
So WE will be back
"That" needs to go.
"the only ones that were NOT, WERE Applejack"
"Thankfully the microphones were off at this POINT, because all they would have heard WOULD BE the young drake HICCUPING"
"Cheese Sandwich as he stood at the edge of the rink with a smile just as BIG as PINKIE'S, filled with pride"
These are just the edits for after pinkie does her routine. It's getting late at the time of posting so I'll look over it more later.
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Thanks a whole bunches for taking the time to help me out this way, all fixed
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Np bro.
Loved the part also, I loved the line