Following a tragic event, a young man stumbles across people claiming that they need to get him to a place called Equestria. But, he ends up falling out of their transportation on the way there, only to land on top of someone called Nightmare Moon.
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that's the best kind of power, though.
I think, and this is just a spit ball here. That the human ends up falling for rainbow dash, just a hunch though.
4385119 Not sure if read old story...or actually making a prediction.
So...am I just supposed to forget everything that's happened so far?
Good Chapter!
Are you going to discontinue the previous story completely for this one?
4385132 I have npt read a word. Not even of this one yet. YET.
4385148 Don't let the
get ya down. Instead, focus on the
Interesting start for an alternate OtR, are you going to continue the main story?
4385142
God, I hope not. The original OtR is pretty damn good.
i am so confused right now please tell me you will do more of the original otr please?
will Alex be a ass in this one or no (i hope not)
Wait...why are we doing this again? Don't you like the story you have now?
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Don't worry, I'mma continue the main story. But they may end differently from one another.
4385148
Don't worry if you're not interested in the premise, I won't be insulted. I mean, I plan on redoing a large portion of a HiE i started 2 years ago. This is simply me reworking the poor story choices i made.
Lots of people are not into this sort of stuff, i get it.
4385594 ill give it a read.
4385594
So basically, we disregard cannon (other than that one ship that has a big part in it) from the original OtR?
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No, it'll be essentially the same. With a few minor changes here and there, and a lot of content skipped. It'll look VERY similar. The slight changes just might change the outcome, because I'm a little stuck on how i want it to end, to be honest.
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Can you even find a good ending for a story this good?!
I think I'll give this a go while I have the chance.
I haven't been able to catch up on the original due to school. I think I'm fifty chapters behind or so.
Aright, now that I've read it, I can say that it does seem to be a decent start. A bit strange, just tossing this new Alex into the story, but that doesn't really have too much of an effect on what's going on.
I actually thought that NMM was throwing a jab at you, sir. I don't know why I thought that's what she was doing.
Anyway, I would enjoy seeing where you'll be taking this, considering your experiences with the original.
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That is what she was doing. It was i joke i made at myself, while elaborating on it with Pinkie.
But other small, and big things will change. You'll see!
4386267 Aha, so I was correct! I guess school hasn't completely depleted my ability to recognize jokes!
I shall wait patiently for your revisions.
so the other one will continue or you will restart everything here
4386338
I'll be doing both at the same time. I can take two, or maybe even three! I can fit whatever they cram in there!
4386736 My eyebrows cannot possibly wiggle hard enough.
4386819
I'm very sorry to say, no one can.
4386736 just don't overwork yourself and rush the stories XD
That was an...interesting start, if not a teensy bit rushed with the nightmare moon bit Still good though, I'm so excited to see how this plays out!
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I'm still wading the waters to see what needs to be shortened, and what needs to be kept at length. I'm simply trying to cut out as much as possible.
If something really does seem wrong, feel free to let me know!
And now I await the arrival of Dax.
Ok, so I know I gave the original an extremely bad review, but i'll be perfectly honest about this one.
I kinda like it. So far that is. Grabbed my attention, held it hostage, and made me want to know more. Even managed to get a few laughs out of me at the end there. So unlike the previous version, I will be reading some more of this than just the first chapter. Hope it only gets better from here!
Question. Is the main character an Alicorn?
Rewrite? More like re-imagining! Holy crap, I honestly didn't expect that! Sheesh, to think I had doubts about this.
Blitzing the intro and adding more timey-wimey Doctor shenanigans, I'm all for that!
4392404 Yes.
SO this is a complete re-do of the original story? A new and improved version lets say? I have not read the original but having read the other comments and having enjoyed the chapter my self, this definitely looks like a good place to start.
Just to be sure though: I don't have to be familiar with the original to enjoy this properly right?
EVERYTHING I KNOW AND LOVE IN THE WORLD IS CRASHING DOWN AROUND ME!
I can appreciate pressing the reset button on this. But still, it's gonna take a while to get back to where you were, if you still want to go in that general direction, especially with the whole Discord thing (which was a great arc, IMO).
You've redeccorated.....
I don't like it.......
I'm sorry but, I just don't....
Will you continue on the original, or is this going to be priority concern?
some of the jokes seem a bit out of place, but that might just be me. the whole bad OC thing seems like it's way to close to Alex finding out his parents died.
it is a bit weird for me, at first i was a bit well not pleased with the two people just catch him and wanting to get him back to Equestria, that made me thinking, was he a pony befor he get there or is he a born Human like i think he is. (sorry for the grammar, have no time right now.)
Beside that and the well Buttattack on Nightmaremoon, i think this chapter was ok and well only the prolog.
Ah, good old Nightmare Moon; breaking the 4th wall with the force of her Canterlot voice. I'm liking the reimagined version of this. However, I'm stuck on which one I should read first. How far do the current chapters go into the story of the original ruffly?
Hey there KoH, sorry I haven't been reading and commenting on the original, I'm trying to get Eli back to read that like old times, so in the meantime I'm going to start reading this on my own I really like the new beginning, and it's nice to see that my ship is still relevant in this one later. I can't wait to see where you take this and I'm sure it'll be just as amazing as the other one.
Heh, i cant get the image of unconscious Alex 'majesticaly' flopping about in the air as the elements do their work.
Well, this is an interesting take. I actually really like the new method of getting to Equestria.
I can tell that the writing style is very different in this, I dig it.