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I'm glad that this story is back up. Eris is my favorite character with her flirty nature and her slapping action. I hope the next chapter comes soon. BTW, considering the amount of bitchslaps Eris gave him, does that mean that poor Gray getting slap will become a running gag?
4485081 yup
Eris is like her father
Grey just abandoned his date, who just so happens to be the daughter of chaos! this can only end in pain.
When i saw there was an update to this story my heart went Yay Cant wait to see Eris getting more pissed of at Grey.
Nononononono need MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please spit out the next chapter. I graduate tomorrow and wont have a computer~! Please~?
4487379 Sorry I haven't even started writing it yet.
4487405 nice, very nice. {while pressing my fingers together like a super villain.}
I'm praise your subtle hints of Twilight's growing infatuation of Grey, it's quite interesting.
I don't know where you going with this but, I do hope that twilight goes insane trying to figure out Grey. It's not like I hate her or anything it's just, she had everything handed over to her. so I would like to see her work for this one, just like in Pinky keen.
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4487699 Oh trust me, madness will spread.
So many more questions and still no answers(which is basically all your OC's). I do like the back to back interaction between Grey and Eris. Is there any explanation why Grey is always saving girls or is that just how he is?
4488443 I'll explain later.
4488443 I'm pretty sure he's trying to build suspense in his characters. I know that I'm trying do that in my writings. Although you bring about valid point. why does Grey save girls? this is how I view it as, he does it because no one else will. he grew up in the slums where justice is excused from them. there's good chance that the cops were being paid off and crooked. ignore my really bad writing, I'm feeling very sluggish today. but I think I got my point out.
Hmmm... I wonder if Eris can read Grey like a book?
4533003 I love that artist!
4533378 Hes also on FimFiction
4533378 Idea: have Eris actually turn him into a book. What happens next, you write.
I've noticed the occasional name "Crank" from your Augmented Love story blending with Grey
Love grey so much. Another thing, twilight GTFO. Stop, just stop.
The story it self is great and the idea around it is great but they way you word this is just terrible and from what was said in thid quote just ruins everything