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Indeed you are a tease.
Plus Dante FTW!!
So many references that I want to shout with joy. I like the flustered look that Twilight got upon seeing Gray training and his dare with Eris. Eris was sexy in this chapter, yet she was also funny with the kiss, the virgin comment, and her reaction to water. The ending was hot and I can't wait for the clop scene to appear. Anyhow, thanks for this chapter as it happened to land on my birthday.
4967827 Happy birthday!
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Thank you for getting my hopes up
That was pretty good. The way AJ reacted to grey saying that his hair was dyed made me feel like his hair is either naturally white or he either A. used magic to change it or B. it like a sayan when his "power level"( him pushing his magic not suppressing it)his hair changes. Or something along those lines.
Care to comment on that
well, that was interesting. I want to whine and complain that you didn't give me enough information but, you did. And what's with you adding more secrets in this story. you're driving me bonkers; did you forget to put the mystery tag on or something.
FINALLY!!!
4967994 I would if there was a mystery tag. If I'm driving you crazy then I'm doing my job.
Normally I don't like stories with clop in them, but yours are the exception. You introduce the characters and fit the clop within the stories. It also helps that you have the characters get to know one another before they get intimate. Other stories just dive fight into the clop and don't give a good reason why we should be happy the participants are together.
Couldn't be more perfect
Grey is now...
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It's that time again, Review Time:
That is a good question, Just because her elbow itched she went straight to Grey's room. And since she knows what her twitches do, then wouldn't see have figured out it was Grey's birthday since she went straight to his room?
Since Eris can shape shift, doesnt that mean she change her body, thereby making her breast and ass bigger than they are currently?
His birthday is the same day as Nightmare Night. If that isn't ominous then I don't know what is.
So you basically turned Canterlot into Gotham and The Osiris is the Narrows.
Even to this day, I cant decide which is my favorite, DMC or DMC 3. I cant wait to find out about DMC 5.
Why did I have the feeling that sooner of later, you were going to do a Game of Throne reference? Even though we never met the Mad King, he has left a impact on the show. I wish we can learn more about him, but at this point of the show I think we learned all there is.
"Never improve upon perfection, Soundwave." ~ Megatron
Shouldn't that be truth?*end of review*
A great chapter. We learn more about Grey's past and the history of The Osiris. We're introduced to new characters(too many for me to keep track.) and more sexual tension between Grey and Eris. I'm trying to remember the moment Eris fell for Grey, but I cant(remind me.) Next chapter is a clop chapter. It has been a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time since the last time you did anything clop related. I can't even remember the last story that had clop(SIB maybe) Point is it's been that long. Let's see if you still have what it takes.
holy shit the statue was eris
4970805 The 'Stronger' quote is orginally from Friedrich Nietzsche, a German Philosopher who's quotes have gotten through some rough times.
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I know about the quote, I just put the song there because that was the first thing that went in my head.
Eris is the staute
I have a question: did this Mad King secretly put people in a hole and call them Edgar?
Such a tease XD and here's for hoping his actual hair color is white!
5259439 you don't understand edger is the one in the hole
Ryan is one creepy motherfucker
Eris...
So? He shall get better if Eris doth turn Grey into a newt
4974947 head ass?