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sometimes i just add explosions to the story in my mind
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This was glorious. I can't wait for the next chapter. Although I am still wanting a new chapter for Fable of the Zealot as well. Oh, and Living with the Night and Tears of Fire. Oh, Augmented love as well...
I just realized, you wrote a lot of fics that I enjoy... If only you would update them...
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
lol the rwby reference
I love this chapter. The classic destroy the maze solution was a nice option for Grey and he's starting to open up to Trixie and be more affections to Eris. The shower scene was funny with Eris imitating Twilight at the last second and then unleashing that bad pun at the end and getting magazine smacked by Grey and put into a corner. BTW, congrats on making Eris a catgirl from now on. Seeing Scarlet jealous when her gal pals complimented Grey mad me laugh. Overall, this chapter was amazing and worth the wait.
Really Eris?
Alright, time for another review:
Why do you have to make Grey so secretive? I think you're overdoing it.(Unless you show me something that shows why.)
Not sure, what kind of dirt he wants on Twilight or why? It's not like their enemies or something.
I bet Grey is going to blast a hole in the wall and walk right through.
.....well what do you know, I was right.(either it's cliche or we think the same.)
So were finally beginning the Trey(I just made that up) shipping part of the story.
I wished that Grey powered up to show how more powerful he is to Trixie. That kind of shit would actually hurt Trixie knowing how she is.
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So that was funny. Grey shows he can be a bad/smart ass at the same time. Twilight is getting on his last nerves(How long until he snaps?) Don't know why, but I'm uninterested in the whole Scarlet part of the story. I'm starting to feel like you're putting too much stuff crammed into this story.(and too many characters) I guess it will pick up my interest when something important happens on her end when the story progresses.
I'm loveing this story, keep up the good work.