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This just keeps getting better and better. But I do have 1 question, where's Trixie in all of this?
4925391 Off doing something. Not sure what.
I love it when this story updates. Don't know why but the breaking fingers scene reminded me of Samurai Champloo. All I know is that the dueling team would become more interesting with Eris in it.
Nice discord.
4925579 Very nice.
Yippee, I was waiting for this story to be updated. So I'm feeling good tonight. It's time for a review:
You this is the type of shit that happens in TV shows where they introduce new characters that you get to know throughout the season. And after the season ends you wait months then when the new season starts, the characters leave like that after getting a bit of dialogue on how/why they left for whatever reason during the off season.
I got to say, that's pretty low for Celestia, asking her student to spy on someone. Again I question how she runs things.
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I solemnly swear that I am up to no good.
Well, since we're on the Harry Potter bandwagon, I'm just going to assume that a part of Grey's father's soul/memory is in that book.(Just admit I'm right so we can move on.)
Da Da Da Daaaa,
SupermanGrey to the rescue.Well shit. You just turned Grey from Superman to Batman. Just like you did with another character(You know who I'm talking about.)
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Isn't it a bit too early to start referencing Christmas movies?(You could have at least waited until after Halloween.(dick))
*scratching my chin too* Hmm, I have a theory about this Bolt guy but I'll wait until I have confirmation.
Oh my god, an ice wizard has a grudge with a fire wizard. Complete genius! Where do you come up with all this original stuff? Also was that Sunset Shimmer?
If two witches were watching two watches, which witch would watch which watch?" *end of review*
Well I enjoyed this chapter, got plenty of comedy and we got to see that Grey isn't all that squeaky clean. I wonder what Twilight will do next to get closer to Grey? *wink wink* I am curious as to why Eris would want to join the team? It's not like she has a lot of motivation and she is pretty powerful that she wouldn't have to try at all to win which would be boring to an all powerful deity. Unless she has her own reason in joining the team.
Damnit Twilight! You need to piss off!
damn both brother and sister got told by discord
4926048 No the blonde isn't Sunset Shimmer and the book thing is also false.
4867791 hey wait, didn't you say you're going to explain this in chapter 10? I'm guessing you forgot about it or you just wanna be annoyingly mysterious. Heck, you're doing a bang up job of making Celestia look bad but, I need a reason why she looks bad. A signed note Osiris is the name of Egyptian God of death and rebirth, so I like that touch you did there. Also I don't mind Grey being like Batman but, I feel like Batman has more restraint than him; granted he's not Batman, he's a different character. speaking about characters~, I love what you did to twilight and shining armor (Hee hee). overall I actually liked this chapter, it remind me of this song.
4928708 Fuck, I forgot about the Osiris. I'll DEFINITELY put it in the next chapter.
I love this! keep up the good work!
Yay :D and twilight, Gtfo
SIT DOWN! HA!