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Human in Equestria16,991 stories ·16,836 members

Through the Looking Glass

Twilight decides to research the mirror that took her to another world, but what she discovers is more than what she bargained for...

Now, with a new human to take care of, and a near-impossible mystery to solve, Twilight begins to come into her own as a princess, and discovers what it truly means to be a protector of the people.

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Shiro Otokonoko

Shiro Otokonoko #1 · Mar 12th, 2014 · · · ...Arriving ·

Comments are welcome, and encouraged. This is my first MLP story, and I'm hoping to learn from it

Clayton the hunter

Clayton the hunter #2 · Mar 17th, 2014 · · · New Beginnings ·

Seems promising so far though there are some capitalization errors that I've found in chapter 2.

Shiro Otokonoko

Shiro Otokonoko #3 · Mar 17th, 2014 · 1 · · New Beginnings ·

4095503 If you mean the sections where the traveler is thinking about Twilight, those were deliberate, ehehe... It's supposed to convey a sense of wonder. He saw her as a deity - more on that in the next chapter. Also, when Luna capitalized Us, she was using the royal 'we'. If there are any other errors, though, feel free to point them out

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