8323209 Personally, I'd have killed him. He's only a human and we kill each other enough already. Besides, my castle is overcrowded - do I really want to make it impossible to walk down my own hallway?
Joseph sighed, before breathlessly speaking, “Good god, you’re beautiful.” He thanked every deity he could think of as his legs thoughtlessly followed his mare.
“Good god, you’re beautiful.” Joseph said breathlessly, as his legs mindlessly trekked towards her.
I think you accidentally doubled up the same phrase here.
By the gods! It's 02:00 AM, i'm tired as fuck, on my bed, with my phone reading the last chapter that's been realeased and I LOVE IT, you magnificent son of your mother, kudos for you <3
Nighty sounds and acts more like a love-drunk teenager than a partially-reformed mistress of Evil.
Added to that, why isn't she considered reformed? She's mostly just really snippy all the time, which isn't an indication of evil-ness. She doesn't seem to do or think anything that's particularly evil. Also, her decision to hide and cry isn't very much like Nightmare Moon, which should be another indication that she's already reformed.
Unless she's using the alone time to concoct a new plan to overthrow the princesses, and also make Joseph regret being alive. Which I hope she does. And then doesn't chicken out of.
So obviously the solution is not to vaporize him but to fuck him.
Why can't I see the original cover art? It just leads to some advertisement site.
poor nightmare, always betrayed always hurt.
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I mean, options are options.
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Personally, I'd have killed him. He's only a human and we kill each other enough already. Besides, my castle is overcrowded - do I really want to make it impossible to walk down my own hallway?
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When in doubt, put you dick in it.
Joseph sighed, before breathlessly speaking, “Good god, you’re beautiful.”
He thanked every deity he could think of as his legs thoughtlessly followed his mare.
“Good god, you’re beautiful.” Joseph said breathlessly, as his legs mindlessly trekked towards her.
I think you accidentally doubled up the same phrase here.
I'm bad at guessing stuff, what's her favorite song?
her favorite song is A Piece of Heaven by Avenged Sevenfold
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DING DING DING, we have a winner!
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Good chance
Part of me wonders how many people would guess "Nightmare" without thinking about what that song's story is.
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I'll just kill the human, thanks.
A piece of heaven by A7X?
fuck outta here with ya damn cliff hangers
If I were a friend to Nightmare Moon, I would never report our friendship.
Joseph fucked up big time, and it's really his fault. What was he thinking?
This is why, Twilight's, friendship reports always felt wrong to me. I like, but hate this chapter so much.
Great job!
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Eyy lmao
Dang, he better explain himself and it better be good.
By the gods! It's 02:00 AM, i'm tired as fuck, on my bed, with my phone reading the last chapter that's been realeased and I LOVE IT, you magnificent son of your mother, kudos for you <3
Love this story can't wait for the next chapter!
Nighty sounds and acts more like a love-drunk teenager than a partially-reformed mistress of Evil.
Added to that, why isn't she considered reformed? She's mostly just really snippy all the time, which isn't an indication of evil-ness. She doesn't seem to do or think anything that's particularly evil. Also, her decision to hide and cry isn't very much like Nightmare Moon, which should be another indication that she's already reformed.
Unless she's using the alone time to concoct a new plan to overthrow the princesses, and also make Joseph regret being alive. Which I hope she does. And then doesn't chicken out of.
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I mean, anything is possible.
more chapters please! :)
Hey Caboose, Church says he will be your very best of super friends if you write more chapters
A7X is a good band