Always enjoyed stories like these, but seriously what is this weird trend of fanfic authors either dealing with some kind of life issue every day or somethin crazy, not trying to be mean or offensive just been all ive been seeing as of late
Y'know, I don't understand the displeasure with Celestia.
"My people are scared that you're dangerous and wanted assurances that you're not. I may be a diarch, but I still only rule as long as they let me, so I have to consider their opinions/wants. I brought you here because this is the safest place - a place where I can personally guarantee your safety - because I don't want the populace getting scared and trying to 'deal with you' themselves."
"Fuck you, bitch!"
Thankfully his reaction wasn't actually that strong and seemed more motivated by dismay over the situation than her part in handling it to everyone's benefit. It'd also be easy to transpose that displeasure to her since she's the easy target here, so I understand.
Just please, don't make her their 'bad guy' despite her actually doing the best thing for them.
7625663 true, im usually hit with the laziness nd procrastination bug, lke i have some written tht i did during high school, i jus never transferred it to my laptop haha
Although dark this is one of those times were I hope the OC and or pony just kill the worthless self proclaimed nobility and anyone who gets in their way. Or they simply leave with Celestia having a knowing and possibly helping as the duo leave the pony world and are never found again. For some reason this chapter with the nobility just really gets under my fur.
Celestia does control the sun so shouldn't that cause a bit of fear in any pony? I know Celestia would do no such a thing involving her sun but any normal pony with half a brain would be just slightly worried about questioning such a being.
I think my emotions are getting ahead of me so I'll just stop here.
“Yes, because a national villain was walking amongst the public unsupervised.”
Every single pony that made the complaint that Nightmare was "unsupervised" needs to be hit in the head till their IQ improves. Luna and Twilight were with both of them the entire time they were out and about. Holy freaking hell, if that can't be considered supervision I don't know what does.
Joseph has the right idea.
“Fuck ‘em.” Joseph said under his breath. (...) “Fuck. Them. Celestia. Fuck them and their petty shit. Fuck their complaints, fuck what they think. And fuck. This. Horse. Shit.”
She wasn't unescorted. She was being escorted by two alicorn princesses. Also what, exactly, do they think s handful of guards could do that two alicorns could not?
Loved this chapter. Really hope something really good happens for Nighty and Joseph. Keep up the good work.
Good chapter.
They should escape even if the nobles let up on Nighty in the end they wont on the human he will be a prisoner forever
It's not dead!
Pretty damn great, I love this story.
And it's back! But please, for the love of my dick, update faster...
7624185 Great update Caboose, hope you recover from the lack of sleep
7624185 he's probably doing the best he can, so be patient ya frick
Always enjoyed stories like these, but seriously what is this weird trend of fanfic authors either dealing with some kind of life issue every day or somethin crazy, not trying to be mean or offensive just been all ive been seeing as of late
It lives!!!!
Y'know, I don't understand the displeasure with Celestia.
"My people are scared that you're dangerous and wanted assurances that you're not. I may be a diarch, but I still only rule as long as they let me, so I have to consider their opinions/wants. I brought you here because this is the safest place - a place where I can personally guarantee your safety - because I don't want the populace getting scared and trying to 'deal with you' themselves."
"Fuck you, bitch!"
Thankfully his reaction wasn't actually that strong and seemed more motivated by dismay over the situation than her part in handling it to everyone's benefit. It'd also be easy to transpose that displeasure to her since she's the easy target here, so I understand.
Just please, don't make her their 'bad guy' despite her actually doing the best thing for them.
Good story. I'm interested to see how those two deal with thier emotions.
7624564 Because it's always the most inconvenient times, when the writing bug strikes.
7625663 true, im usually hit with the laziness nd procrastination bug, lke i have some written tht i did during high school, i jus never transferred it to my laptop haha
Although dark this is one of those times were I hope the OC and or pony just kill the worthless self proclaimed nobility and anyone who gets in their way. Or they simply leave with Celestia having a knowing and possibly helping as the duo leave the pony world and are never found again. For some reason this chapter with the nobility just really gets under my fur.
Celestia does control the sun so shouldn't that cause a bit of fear in any pony? I know Celestia would do no such a thing involving her sun but any normal pony with half a brain would be just slightly worried about questioning such a being.
I think my emotions are getting ahead of me so I'll just stop here.
Daaaaaw, some ex villan is starting to develope a wee crush!
awesome the story's not gone to the dogs :D :3 woo!!
Every single pony that made the complaint that Nightmare was "unsupervised" needs to be hit in the head till their IQ improves. Luna and Twilight were with both of them the entire time they were out and about. Holy freaking hell, if that can't be considered supervision I don't know what does.
Joseph has the right idea.
Omg I totally agree buck political bs. When r they going to cement a relationship? Love the store dude keep it going
Thanks to you, because of your story I've found this awesome group/song.
Could you share all of his tracklist? About some king and another one?
She wasn't unescorted. She was being escorted by two alicorn princesses.
Also what, exactly, do they think s handful of guards could do that two alicorns could not?
Ýay!! More warm fuzzies
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