7127391 Couldn't agree with you more. Aside from a few spelling issues here and there (which, as a writer who often does his work at night, I understand) this chapter was really enjoyable to read. I hope to see more from you soon, Caboose.
7128179 I'm just shocked, cause at like 2 am I was considering rewriting the whole thing because it seemed like it wasn't my best effort. A little editing, and putting in a couple paragraphs of what I was actually trying to say so all of you wonderful people reading could kind of understand what I was trying to do. Basically, as I reread it, there were questions I raised to myself, that I had to figure out how to write out in the text, so if a reader had the same question, it'd be answered. Eventually, I slapped my approval on it which is the equivalent of a GED, posted it, hoped for the best as I tried to sleep. So really, nothing new for me.
I just finished reading both this and "From one scene, to another", and I must say, I loved them, especially this one. It's pretty rare to me to like a Nightmare Moon romance fic, the only reason I'm not favoriting this YET is because there's only 4 chapters.
“I was just listening to music.” He retorted, his cheeks reddening slightly. “I know I was on the moon for one thousand years, but I beg to differ.” She spoke, her eyes narrowing ever so slightly. He rolled his eyes, “That’s because it’s music from where I’m from.” “Do they not know what music is there?” She added with a small smirk.
I concur.
Nightmare Moon was taken back, “How dare they? I shall condemn them for disrespecting such a kind human. Their bodies will hang in the streets, and their children shall beat them with sticks.”
Nightmare Moon is so amazingly goth. I bet she farts bats or something.
Worth the wait
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Agreed.
That ending was sweet.
Awesome chapter.
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7127391 Couldn't agree with you more. Aside from a few spelling issues here and there (which, as a writer who often does his work at night, I understand) this chapter was really enjoyable to read. I hope to see more from you soon, Caboose.
Huzzah its not dead
I did not see the issues you described in your beginning author's note. Good chapter
It lives once again
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There's nothing better than sleeping in till about noon on your day off from life, and finding that I didn't completely flop on the newest chapter.
7128170 that sounds kinda depressing lol
7128179 I'm just shocked, cause at like 2 am I was considering rewriting the whole thing because it seemed like it wasn't my best effort. A little editing, and putting in a couple paragraphs of what I was actually trying to say so all of you wonderful people reading could kind of understand what I was trying to do. Basically, as I reread it, there were questions I raised to myself, that I had to figure out how to write out in the text, so if a reader had the same question, it'd be answered. Eventually, I slapped my approval on it which is the equivalent of a GED, posted it, hoped for the best as I tried to sleep. So really, nothing new for me.
7128187 don't stress out over it, it's your fanfic that you made for fun (i'm assuming) just take your time.
mmmm pizza
Great chapter!!
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Ditto.
This chapter seems totally fine to be honest. I love it ^^
This was a great chapter, me likey.
Heh, seems like "nighty" is falling in love
Read this part immediatly knew it wad hail tot the king
Good chapter!!!
I just finished reading both this and "From one scene, to another", and I must say, I loved them, especially this one. It's pretty rare to me to like a Nightmare Moon romance fic, the only reason I'm not favoriting this YET is because there's only 4 chapters.
I concur.
Nightmare Moon is so amazingly goth. I bet she farts bats or something.
7145061 There will be more...probably...