Twilight is Catched in a Pokeball.

by dtlux1

Chapter 9 Part 1 1/2

"Can't say I remember you," said Twilight, "And I would remember 'you'."

"Oh, really now?" asked the Doctor, "And why is that?"

Time seemed to be frozen around The Doctor and Twilight. Red looked weird, and Twilight laughed. But then she noticed time was frozen.

"How are you doing this?" asked Twilight the Doge.

"I am a timelord," said the Doctor, "I can do things like this."

"Whay are you freezing time though?" asked Twilight.

"You said you would remember me," said the Doctor, "Why is that?"

"I don't know," said Twilight, "It just sort of came out."

"Do you know why it came out?" said the Doctor, "Was it my good looks?"

"I never said that." said Twilight.

She looked at the Doctor, and she sudenly felt something weird, like she did when she gave Red mouth to mouth.

"Are you denying I look good?" asked The Doctor.

"W-What?" said Twilight, "No, I was just, well, I don't know."

"You know something Twilight," said The Doctor, "I think I know where I saw you before."

OH, really?" asked Twilight, "Where did you see me?"

I was in a relationship with another version of you." said the Doctor.

""WHAT!?!?!" asked Twilight the Malimar, "WHAT DO YOU MEAN!"

"I have travled all through Time and space Twilight," said The Doctor, "I was with you in another dimension."

You mean like the alternat dimensions theory?" asked Twilight.

"Yes and you still look as beutyful as ever in this dimension." said the Doctor. "And I think I want to date you still."

"I, well, I don't know," said Twilight, "I don't know what to say, as this is all so sudden."

"I didn't expect you to say yes right away Twilight Sparkle." He said.

"You didn't?" asked Twilight Sparkle.," said the Doctor, "That is why I was prepared to do this."

The Doctor then kissed Twilight. Twilight didn't know what to do. She loved the kiss, but then also remembered how she felt with PKMN Trainer Red.

"I am sorry," said Twilight, "But I think I may like Red the Pokemon Trainer."

"Him?" asked the Doctor, "What does he have that I don't have?"

"I don't know," said Twilight, "But I also feel like we could be something."

"I guess it can't be," said The Doctor, "You aren't my Twilight anyways."

The Doctor was sad.

"I guess we could kiss one more time." said Twilight.

"Really?" asked The Doctor.

"Yes," said Twilight, "It will make you happy, and let me kiss you one more time."

"So you do like me?" asked the Doctor.

"Yes," said Twilight, "But I want to be with Trainer Red the Pokemon Trainer, and since I travle with him, it will be easyer for me."

"Twilight," said The Doctor, "I could give you the choice of a lifetime."

"What is it?" asked Twilight.

"You could come with me. Travle in time and space." said The Doctor, "A once in a lifetime opertunity."

"I don't know." said Twilight, "I am happy with Red right now."

"Oh," said The Doctor, "I see."

"But if you still want to," said Twilight, "I can travel with you when I am done traleing with Red."

"I would like that," said The Doctor.

"Good," said Twilight, "Can you unfreeze everything?"

"Sure," said The Doctor, "But let us pretend that this never happened, exept the part where you said you would come with me."

"Agreed." said Twilight.

"Now stand right there." said the Doctor, "And pretend we are still having the conversation from before I froze everything."

"Ok." said Twilight.

The Doctor unfroze everything."

" Oh," replied the Doctor in a knowing manner, "I get it now, alternet dimensions theory and all that."

Author's Note:

This chapter was sugested to me when someone read that first line outloud in a sugestive maner, and I have to write everything sugested to me. I can't wait to write more. Also, I have a rule, once it is published, no editing anything but the authors note. Sorry for the big mistake in this chapter, and see you next time.

Comments

[Princess Cadence]

3978474
No one with an IQ over 80 likes your story.

[Shilic]

3990056 I like this story and my IQ was 100 and somthing the last time I was tested (which was like 8 years ago) So, yeah, you're just being insulting.

[Princess Cadence]

3992699
Yes, I am being insulting.
It is widely considered to be a great way to express disdain, which you would already know if you were actually telling the truth about your own intelligence.

[Shilic]

3992832 Yes, because the best way to argue with people is CLEARLY to insult them. The reason I like this story is BECAUSE it's so bad. I at half of what's written. But instead of insulting the author, I praised him. Because that is the nice thing to do. You, people like you are the reason I don't read comments anymore.

[Princess Cadence]

3993989
"Because that is the nice thing to do"

You're absolutely right. Let's encourage people do to dumb things on purpose because we want to be "nice", in fact, why don't you send a fan letter to Miley Cyrus, Justin Bieber and whoever wrote the Twilight books telling them that you really love their work, and they should just keep being awesome.

[Shilic]

3994688 Wow. Butthurt much? In all seriousness, I agree, this fic is horrible. But it amuses me. I look at this and go "Haha, this is stupid and poorly written." And then, instead of doing what everyone else in the comments are doing, I thank the author for making me chuckle. The difference between this and things like Bieber and the Twilight books is that the author of this understands that this isn't the best, and doesn't go around saying "Look at my amazing thing that is better that everything else!" You missed the point of my last previous comments; This is I like this story, I don't think it is good.

[dtlux1]

3990056 B-but, I HAVE AN IQ OF 80 1/2

[dtlux1]

3994781 I love how there is a whole chain of comments going off of this: 3978174 It is entertaining to see what people think of my story, weather good or bad.

I like this story, I don't think it is good.

I would agree with you there. Instead of making it perfect, I make it as is And people like you say what this story is, a loveable story, but a bad story.

[dtlux1]

"You didn't?" asked Twilight Sparkle.," said the Doctor, "That is why I was prepared to do this."

"You didn't?" asked Twilight Sparkle.
"No," said the Doctor, "That is why I was prepared to do this."

[Boja131]

3994688

Your

You just made your own argument null and void.

[FunnyK111]

[poppys]

I can't stand to read this anymore!

[poppys]

No offense but still!.I'm gonna be sick.