• Published 28th Jan 2014
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Love in the city - Xx soul sorrow xX



Rarity and Carot Top pay eachother a visit while babysitting dinky doo.

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Night time

they were done drinking their coffee and Rarity turned to Carot Top.
"Carot Top, I have to show you something." she looked at Dinky who was still asleep.
Rarity got up and Carot followed her.
"Oh, okay. Where are we goin' to?"
"To the rooftop. It's so beautiful and special. It's night time and the stars are out and the lights in the city glow like love in the air."

Carot and Rarity went up there and they were on the roof now. Rarity spoke quietly when they were up there.
She said "Carot, it's been forever since we got to talk. I've missed you all the years. Living in Lost Vegas gives me stress unlike Ponyville."
"Oh, I like it."
"Yeah... Hey, isn't it so beautiful? It's like love is surrounding us, it's so romantic."

Rarity leaned into Carot and they kissed and Carot was surprised and she was like, "oh, okay."
Then they kissed. But they heard someone coming up on the roof. It was Dinky and they stopped. Dinky was up there.
"Carot, I fell asleep but then I woke up and now I want to sleep but I can't yeah."
So Carot and Rarity went in the apartment and Dinky went to Rarity's bed and she layed in it. Then Rarity gave her some warm milk from the fridge and she drank it.
"Carot can you read me a story before I go to bed?" Dinky said.
" okay. Well, once uponna time, there were two ponies that never seen each other in a long time. They missed eachother and one day, they visited each other and they still love each other. So then they kissed and their love was on fire like a burning blaze that burned forever for eternity."
Rarity started crying, "I didn't know that's how you felt, Carot."
Carot looked at Dinky and she was asleep.
"Oh, okay. Dinky's asleep now. I love you Rarity. I always have always."
"Me too."
Then they kissed and they drank more coffee and laughed the night away.

Author's Note:

omy God, thxs for the support. it took me a few days to write this story and spraklshipper helped me and the cover art is by kittykat67 they my frens form school. okay thats it for now, byebye <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<333333333333

Comments ( 11 )

i didnt reed it bur i luv it :heart::heart::heart::heart:

srry forgot my emoticonz
:heart::heart::heart::pinkiesick::heart::heart::heart::heart:

yea but i didnt lik 1 part. the part were that 1 guy drank the coughee:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

3890991 oh :rainbowlaugh: yeah that part was a real challegnge to write i just dont got teh rite wording yknow???????? :rainbowkiss:

3890998 yeaa i kno. i still liked it tho. i also liked turban luv:rainbowkiss:


3891020
oh yeah! It's great i like it i like I likeit when the bean chair :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Ogh yeah Im almost done with school of love next book. Didju read the first book??????????its on my page:pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp::trixieshiftright::eeyup:

3891092 yeae I read itt and dat was meh favorite. I luvd the part were he found a candee in his shoe and he gaved it to that girll yeah:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::rainbowwild:

Hey are you still onlineeeee???? :(((((:eeyup::facehoof::applecry:

Ara

This was another tour de force that blew my breaths away. :fluttershbad:

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