• Published 27th Jan 2014
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The Alicorn of the Everfree - Lady Lightning Strike



Shining Star is a young Alicorn. Raised with her family, she speaks the language of the Animals. Midnight Flower is her sister. She is known to visit Town. When the CMC decide to explore the forest alone, they find something that was best left alone.

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Need Help

So as the chapter title says, I need some help from you all. I decided to toss out my old notes after seeing how many holes their were in the plot line. There are three basic things I do need from you readers to help this story become into something amazing.

1 - Original Characters - If you want your O.C. in this story, send me a PM with their name and their bio. (Alicorns can be added but no overpowered characters. Everyone has a flaw.)

2 - Ideas - As I said, I threw out my old notes due to them being so terrible plot wise. If you have an idea that you think would work, let me know. This story was originally inspired by the show The Librarians. So I will have The Library in here at some point.

3 - Lore - I'll admit I stopped watching the show after Twicorn happened. So my knowledge of the lore ends there. I got only bits and pieces from what I've read up upon. So I want you help getting caught up and then you opinions on what you think the show missed out on.

This story, with the help of everyone, will hopefully become alive once more.
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!!! Spoiler ahead !!!
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NO i'm not going to make Shining Star be Celestia's mother.
She's Spitfire's mom already.

Comments ( 2 )

If you're having lore problems, just remember you're using an alternate universe tag. You can pretty much make your own Equestria at that point.

As for the plot, I don't know. Just make sure it's solid and interesting. The best way to find ideas is from looking at other good fics, or anything with a good story.

For your OCs, you should probably have only Shining Star be the only alicorn OC. Unless you're going with the alternate universe idea I mentioned earlier, alicorns should be far and few between. They're extremely rare and represent something greater. To have 2 or 3 alicorn OCs running around together may reduce the significance of what alicorns are.

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1 - only one was ever planned.....
2 - without my notes, i have no idea where this was going. Or even what started it
3 - I have no idea what the heck im doing. I am a Juryrigger, not a Forger. Building thing is extremely hard. That includes stories.
4- You know how old this thing is? I'm actually surprised you found it.
5 - Congrats at being the first to comment!

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