YEAH! Nopony should be alone like that unless they WANT to be alone...

(Will be skipping the clop in the next chapter, if I can.)

hell yea it is! this is awesome

That that touched my feels. So sad.

in my opinion clop is better when there is a story.

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I agree with this.

I leave feedback and and I love your stories !!!

I'm sorry, but... This nonclop part just feels... Meh. The dialogue seems dull, and quite frankly, the main character is a bit of a doofus and blows things out of proportion. He wakes up, sees someone he knows walking at night, and just immediately assumes she must be getting attacked?
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I was just about to read the next chapter when I saw

Leave feedback! Why don't you leave feedback?!

It made me laugh so I decided I would actually leave some.

I personally like the way you write; Your descriptions of the surroundings are short and concise, and I like how you show what the character is thinking through little conversations with himself.

Oh well.
She is a busy woman, surely enough. She runs this entire farm. She can’t afford to spend all day talking to you.
And that’s just fine.

The setting was described rather well and I like the character's attitude towards it

This place sucks.

The little bits of humor you sprinkle around such as that, I at least find enjoyable.

Ms. Jubilee's character I did not find any problems with and was done well.
The character that is supposed to be the reader was too enthusiastic or tried to be too helpful that it was a bit unrealistic in a few places I felt.

You gasp.
Is she being robbed?

This kind of came out of nowhere.

Also the dialogue was a bit dull as Dances With Hobos has said.

Other than the over enthusiasm of ...me since this is second person? and the dullness of some of the conversations I haven't found any problems with the story so far and have been enjoying it.

I have no feedback to give you!!!!

love a clop with some backstory to it! amazing!

Oh... her character makes me wish to put her in a story... I shall!

*feed back*

... I have nothing to say right now other than "you're doing a solid job at this, keep going at it like that". It's true.

Yes. Reading this story is better then just clop

Beautiful story, clop is good only if their is a story to go along with it.

This story makes me feel like there should be more stories around Cherry.

i am enjoying this story for the story itself its a good read