I knew that i should of told her how I discovered her long ago. I just could never choke out the right words. When Fire Gleamer told me that some ponies looked at her funny, I knew I had to show her. I knew I had to show her who she really was. Since she was just a tiny filly, she never knew how she looked, or minded. That moment, right there I broke the awkward silence and handed her a mirror. She gasped in horror as she saw her reflection. She burst out of Sugarcube Corner and ran away.
It's been three years since my little Fire Gleamer ran away. I can now only wish that she is safe. At night I look out inside the night sky and whenever I see a star, I am reminded of little Gleamer. I can only hope that she is safe, looking at the same star that twinkles in the night sky, almost as if it has a gleam in its eye itself.
1,200 words? Obviously made without much effort. You spelled Pinkie's name wrong in the description, and you overuse caps-lock. Downvoted.
Oh, I just checked your tags by the way, I think I missed that scene where Celestia and Luna made out at the gala. I can't think of why else they're tagged but not apparent in the plot.
This is kind of short but still really good. I would love for you to post another part to this story.
It could use some more words...just a little bit...adding some more context would be nice as well...
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I'll try to add some more content in part 2
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I didn't know how to spell her name
i'll make a part 2 which i'll try to put more effort in!
here's a sneak peek for the next part of the story-
Fire Gleamer goes on a quite remarkable journey to find her biological parents which she has found alive. Will she ever find them? Will she make lots of new friends along the way?
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Sounds good, can't wait!