Hmmmm, this reminds me a lot of the fanfic that I started a couple weeks ago... Rarity getting turned male and having issues related to it.

It's a fun topic, gender-swapping. And now that you've posted this, I just have to comment.

*marks to read later*

Great, just great, I liked the entire fic. If you continue, please keep it up with this quality. I loved the descriptoin, all of it. Keep it up!

And...nobody ever questioned that his cutie mark was the SAME as Rarity's?

Isn't that a bit of a stretch? I mean...is that possible to have identical cutie marks?

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Quite possible
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Flarity with genderbending?
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An excellent fic. Keep up with the good work in future installments.

This has a lot of hilarious potential. And I'm amused to see a fic of this nature where it isn't Twilight going around giving mares doodles.

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Yes. Just ask Doctor Whooves, Colgate and Leeroy Wingkins.

This site needs a gender-bend section and more good gender-bent fics.
This is really good and can't wait to read more.

This kinda reminded me of another fic I read, where Twilight tried to turn a mannequin into a male form for Rarity, but the spell hit Pinkie instead.

Hilarity ensued.

453190 Looking for this? I may be biased because I really like Rule 63 for some reason, but they're pretty much all good!

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Thanks. Rule 63 is enjoyable, but a little wrong as well, but then again the Internet was recreated by the users of the Internet for some pretty wired things.

453480 Yeah... the first good fanfiction I ever read was On a Cross and Arrow, and that's pretty much set the tone for me

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It was good.
It was the first Rule 63 Pony fic I ever read.

I can see this becoming an entire series.

this was wonderful
keep it coming friend

As a Rule 63 shippper, I whole heartily approve of this.
Can't wait to see where this goes.

This is a great story you have here. Keep up the good work. I wonder if Spike will become gay for Elusive... hmm... hahaha.

Me gusta.

well done...

This is a pretty good start on what promises to be an enjoyable story. I'm a little surprised that Rarity would have a gender-bender spell in one of her magic books, though I imagine that if she got it on a loan request from Twilight for spells relating to clothing design issues I could see Miss Checklist For All Possibilities making sure that she would have options for stallion design work "just in case". I hope that your Muse feels like continuing this story, I really want to see where it goes next.

Why doesn't Elusive just somehow... Ieont know, die in an accident. Rarity could pretend to mourn, and he would be gone.

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might have something to do with breaking fluttershy`s heart and knowing it.

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Would you go on and break someone's heart later on when it got out of hand and have them never forgive you, or kill the person off before the lies get to big, and end it.

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Dude, my answer to that would be to go with the former because Fluttershy never forgiving someone is like Rarity being stingy. And being in Discord's control does not count towards what I just said.

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Just becuse she is kindness doesn't mean she can't hate, just lik Pinkie Pie can be sad.

461542 I never said she couldn't. I just said that she wouldn't

I am not sure about you guys, but I am sorta hoping that the spell backfires, leaving Rarity as Elusive.... Permanently.
That would make for some awkward drama.

474845 I'd be lying if I said, I didn't agree with you. That would kind of be my preferred take on this. (Though, a fic about Fluttershy and the real Elusive probably would have been interesting as well.)
I just don't want to see either of them hurt, which might happen. (It's a possiblity. Lying can do that.)

.>>Evowizard25 Indeed. Now imagine how Applejack and Rainbow Dash will look once they find out the truth.... Oh sweet drama and despair... A fainting Elusive who is traumatized by the sudden tragedy wouldn't be so bad either. Perhaps it would force Fluttershy to help rescue the poor darling.
I can imagine it all now, and I can't wait to see it.

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When this happens....

Gah I really want a second chapter. I want to know if Rarity breaks the news to Fluttershy, and how fluttershy will react.

Translation: I liked it.

Will there be a second chapter cosmonaut?

Let's see where this goes!

Not bad! I like it!

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Maybe because it's from the same author xD

Here I am getting into a huff over finding a suitable male to model for me when the answer is right here she thought, flipping through the book until stopping at the appropriate spell on page sixty-three.

I c wut you did ther

Rule#63+rule#34+straight

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lol they are time lords if you get the reference

Incredibly intricate fic. This practically SCREAMS continuation. Please, please, please tell me there will be more chapters.

That was weird... weird but fun.
Onto the next chapter!

Applejacks = plural
Applejack's = possessive
Several such errors in this text. Grammatical clop is better clop.

I was reading all of Elusive's lines out loud with my velvety accent.

1078563 It was weird butt fun?

This was great... And then you ruined it with the hymen... Well, for clop that is, it's still a good story.

"Page 63 of the book"
Lol
Good one.

Please write more . Its bery well done and you can help but read

page sixty-three.

I see what you did there...