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Cosmonaut
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Cosmonaut
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Hmmmm, this reminds me a lot of the fanfic that I started a couple weeks ago... Rarity getting turned male and having issues related to it.
It's a fun topic, gender-swapping. And now that you've posted this, I just have to comment.
*marks to read later*
Great, just great, I liked the entire fic. If you continue, please keep it up with this quality. I loved the descriptoin, all of it. Keep it up!
And...nobody ever questioned that his cutie mark was the SAME as Rarity's?
Isn't that a bit of a stretch? I mean...is that possible to have identical cutie marks?
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Quite possible
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Flarity with genderbending?
...
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An excellent fic. Keep up with the good work in future installments.
This has a lot of hilarious potential. And I'm amused to see a fic of this nature where it isn't Twilight going around giving mares doodles.
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Yes. Just ask Doctor Whooves, Colgate and Leeroy Wingkins.
This site needs a gender-bend section and more good gender-bent fics.
This is really good and can't wait to read more.
This kinda reminded me of another fic I read, where Twilight tried to turn a mannequin into a male form for Rarity, but the spell hit Pinkie instead.
Hilarity ensued.
453190 Looking for this? I may be biased because I really like Rule 63 for some reason, but they're pretty much all good!
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Thanks. Rule 63 is enjoyable, but a little wrong as well, but then again the Internet was recreated by the users of the Internet for some pretty wired things.
453480 Yeah... the first good fanfiction I ever read was On a Cross and Arrow, and that's pretty much set the tone for me
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It was good.
It was the first Rule 63 Pony fic I ever read.
I can see this becoming an entire series.
this was wonderful
keep it coming friend
As a Rule 63 shippper, I whole heartily approve of this.
Can't wait to see where this goes.
This is a great story you have here. Keep up the good work. I wonder if Spike will become gay for Elusive... hmm... hahaha.
Me gusta.
well done...
This is a pretty good start on what promises to be an enjoyable story. I'm a little surprised that Rarity would have a gender-bender spell in one of her magic books, though I imagine that if she got it on a loan request from Twilight for spells relating to clothing design issues I could see Miss Checklist For All Possibilities making sure that she would have options for stallion design work "just in case". I hope that your Muse feels like continuing this story, I really want to see where it goes next.
Why doesn't Elusive just somehow... Ieont know, die in an accident. Rarity could pretend to mourn, and he would be gone.
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might have something to do with breaking fluttershy`s heart and knowing it.
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Would you go on and break someone's heart later on when it got out of hand and have them never forgive you, or kill the person off before the lies get to big, and end it.
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Dude, my answer to that would be to go with the former because Fluttershy never forgiving someone is like Rarity being stingy. And being in Discord's control does not count towards what I just said.
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Just becuse she is kindness doesn't mean she can't hate, just lik Pinkie Pie can be sad.
461542 I never said she couldn't. I just said that she wouldn't
I am not sure about you guys, but I am sorta hoping that the spell backfires, leaving Rarity as Elusive.... Permanently.
That would make for some awkward drama.
474845 I'd be lying if I said, I didn't agree with you. That would kind of be my preferred take on this. (Though, a fic about Fluttershy and the real Elusive probably would have been interesting as well.)
I just don't want to see either of them hurt, which might happen. (It's a possiblity. Lying can do that.)
.>>Evowizard25 Indeed. Now imagine how Applejack and Rainbow Dash will look once they find out the truth.... Oh sweet drama and despair... A fainting Elusive who is traumatized by the sudden tragedy wouldn't be so bad either. Perhaps it would force Fluttershy to help rescue the poor darling.
I can imagine it all now, and I can't wait to see it.
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When this happens....
Gah I really want a second chapter. I want to know if Rarity breaks the news to Fluttershy, and how fluttershy will react.
Translation: I liked it.
Will there be a second chapter cosmonaut?
Not bad! I like it!
Lolwut
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Yeah I know, it's not a very amazing ending but try as I might I couldn't conjure up a suitable following chapter that didn't feel silly or contrived. Still, I had ideas down and I wrote them and here they are...
650078 I should clarify: I was lolwutting because I thought this was a oneshot
Awww now I wanna know if Rarity gonna come clean and take responsibility or not
Ah, what a tangled web we weave, when we endeavour to write a one-shot... like Turai, I wan't to know if Rarity's going to take to fatherhood!
650078 Lovely! maybe a sequal? a non-clop sequal even!
That can't be the end. No way. I wanna see papa Rarity!!!!!!!!! Lol!!!!!
Crap. I was loving that right up until the The End. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Still though, great story.
YEY BEBES
That irritated feel when you realize you can't thumbs-up a story because you already did.
Great ending, hahaha
Well, looks like Rarity is going to be a father.
Actually, I think this shouldn't be the end. You've told half of a story. The premise is interesting, but it needs resolution.
There is vast potential for drama here. Rarity has committed an act with complex ethical depths. She didn't mean to do wrong, things just... went too far for too long. Now there are consequences that will change all of their lives forever. This is prime drama to mine, here. Everything you have written up to this point has been the set up, now you need the pay off.
In effect, you have a man at bat, you have a pitcher throw, and the man at bat starts to swing. The end. We don't know if he makes it to first, much less home. We don't know the result of the situation you have presented.
What happens when Rarity tells the truth? Does she tell the truth? Would she feel so guilty that she would do a permanent spell on herself and just assume the life of Elusive whatever it cost her?
If she tells the truth, would Fluttershy reject her, and if so, for how long? Could they reconcile? How would all of this affect their friends? would they end up a couple? How would that work out? Would Rarity just pay child support forever? Would this bring them closer, or push them farther away?
In all of that, you have a HELL of a second half... you have the rest of the story, the pay off.
These are my thoughts.
but.but...
raritys a...
and fluttershy said she was...
.......TWINS!?!
lol fluttershys labor face>
Lol
how is that even possible??
great story!!
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I know I know. I feel like a butt leaving open the potential for such a story and leaving it at this epilogye. The problem is that I have other story priorities I want to work with and this one...well, I don't have the bug to continue it.
may i suggest tagging as "on hiatus" or maybe leaving a note about an eventual sequel in authors notes at end, i understand that you wont be getting to it now or even soon, but it should be continued eventually.
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Yes. I know that sensation. No use trying to write something if you don't 'feel' it. Sorry. I just saw the potential, was all.
I found this story be a diamond in the rough, its amusing and with a little work it could shine like the best of them. Hope you actually make a sequel to this were Rarity admits to being the father but if not well that's all up to you anyway another great story keep up the good work.
