The four ponies stood in front of the cave, thick plumes of smoke billowing out of it.
The dragon let out a throaty chuckle. "And what exactly is some little pony going to do to make me leave?" he asked.
"I may be little, but I'm not just anypony!" Twilight exclaimed. Confidence oozed off her gorgeous body, and even the mighty dragon was momentarily taken aback.
Her horn lit up, and a ribbon of purple energy spiraled out of it. The thin sheet of magic shot towards the huge dragon. It wound across his tail, encircling it and tightening and lengthening as it went. It moved up the the rest of his body, growing bigger and bigger, big enough to cover the entirety of the mighty creature. As the cocoon of energy reached the dragon's chest, he let out an irate growl. A jet of flame struck the spell, but it continued to expand as if nothing had happened.
The sheet of magic reached his face, and another angry roar managed to escape his lips before it wound around his mouth.
In seconds the dragon had been cocooned completely by Twilight's powerful spell. There was a hint of movement within the pointy prison, but the magic was too opaque to see through. A thin strip of magic still connected to Twilight's horn, and as the seams spiraling around the creature began to solidify and vanish, the strip thrashed violently.
Applejack opened her mouth to say something (probably both complimentary and dumbfounded), but stopped.
The cocoon began to shrink.
It was as natural and as gradual as the sun setting. Without close attention nopony would have even noticed it. After a few seconds it had become unmistakable, the dragon less than two-thirds of his former size.
As the magic shrunk, it slowly started to recede into Twilight's horn. Her aura grew brighter and brighter as the purple shell flowed into her horn.
Then it was over. The dragon had vanished. Twilight's eyes snapped open and she let out a gasp, her breathing heavy and strained.
"Twilight? Are ya alright?" Applejack muttered.
Twilight clamped a hoof over her mouth. Even muffled by the limb, her scream was loud enough for everypony to hear. There was a brilliant red flash, and everypony threw up a hoof to cover their eyes.
When the light faded, Twilight gasped.
Her mane had a red streak in it alongside the pink and purple ones, but that wasn't the main difference. A pair of wings had sprouted out of her back. They matched her coat, but they were leathery and pointy, like bat wings. She sucked in a deep breath, and it was obvious that two of her teeth had grown into fangs.
Twilight ran her tongue over one of the teeth. "I wasn't expecting that imprisonment spell to work quite like this," she muttered.
"Well, uhm, better 'n dealing with a dragon, right?" Applejack said.
Twilight coughed, and a plume of purple fire spilled out of her mouth. "I guess so. As long as the town is safe, then I don't care what sacrifices I need to make."
"Hey, having some dragon magic can't hurt, right?" Rainbow Dash started floating towards the edge of the mountain. "Besides, now you can fly again. I think those wings look good on you."
"Yeah!" Pinkie bounced happily. "And just think! You could run your own mail service! With all that dragonfire, you and Spike could corner the market!"
Twilight chuckled. "I don't deserve friends as amazing as you. Come on, we better get back to town."
Dearest Princess Twilight,
I foalnapped Fluttershy while you were off dealing with that pesky dragon. I also brainwashed her with vampire magic so now she's my slave. Because I'm evil.
Sincerely,
Princess RarityP.S. I'm prettier than you
Dictated, but not read.
Secretary's note; I'm really really sorry that I didn't get this right, but Princess Rarity just kept talking and talking and I lost track of what she was saying. She is so beautiful and eloquent, just watching her speak is a privilege. I could get lost in her eyes forever, even if she wasn't using magic to control me! I didn't want to ask her to repeat herself and disappoint her, so I just wrote the gist of what she was saying. The original speech was much more poetic and descriptive and worthy of someone as amazing as her, trust me!
I'm so sorry, please don't be mad! I'm not a very good brainwashed slave, but I'll try much harder next time, I promise!
Princess Rarity is a thousand times better and prettier than you,
Fluttershy
Twilight slammed her hoof onto the desk, the note beginning to smoke and curl around the edges as it crumpled under her grip.
"This is all my fault," she muttered. "I should never have left Fluttershy alone in town."
AJ put a hoof on the princess' shoulder. "There was nothin' you coulda done, Twilight."
"Yeah, none of us could convince that crybaby coward to come with us to confront the dragon." Rainbow Dash shrugged. "I say we're better off without her, anyway. She always was useless and boring."
"Rainbow Dash, how can you say that!" Pinkie shouted. "She's our friend! We need to save her, and Rarity too, even if she is a really evil vampire now. She'll always be our friend!"
"She didn't seem too repentant in the bedroom," Applejack muttered.
"But--"
Twilight held up a hoof, cutting off Pinkie's sentence before it began. "No, Pinkie, they're right. I'll do my best to save them, but if Rarity and Fluttershy can't be saved, then the safety of a Equestria comes first. As long as the world is safe, then I don't care what sacrifices I need to make." She turned to the door. "Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to go report to Princess Celestia that the dragon has been dealt with."
...I am mildly disturbed at the dragon's implied fate of being eaten alive.
Other than that, princess twilhgt is bst pone kthxbi
This is an incredible story, but the chapters seem rather short sometimes. You should fill it out more. Perhaps you could describe Twilight's appearance more often - you know, what she's wearing, what color her eyes are, that sort of thing. And you could have her do things like rescuing foals and teaching Trixie magic and designing dresses (obviously somepony needs to make the gala dresses, and who is better at it than Twilight?).
The bit with the dragon was kinda exciting, but there was too much spotlight on the dragon and also Applejack. I want to see more scenes with Twilight, you know?
3549918 But he was clearly a jerk I did consider putting a disclaimer that I dont support animal cruelty at the top of the chapter, but i figured it might be distracting and its so obvious the dragon was really asking for it.
you think mebbe i should have left it in?
FYI the disclaimer would've looked like this;
Also maybe its like naruto and the dragon is still alive and can give twilight advice now? (OMG I LOVE NARUTO IT IS THE BEST THING EVER BESIDES MLP OBV) EDIT: Not that she needs advice ofc
3549940 this is very good advice originally I was going to have twilight be the only character but then I realized that might get a liitle boring--i mean if twilight was the only character who would be there to compliment her? I mean sure the reader would but twilight cant really react to that as fluidly. I always hated that fourth wall thing with pinkie so i made sure that princess twilight didnt have such a dumb power (to make room for all her other cool powers).
... Flarity spotted.
Wow! I can't remember the last time I saw that bit of pretentiousness, but it's quite refreshing to see that it hasn't been forgotten.
Gonna have to agree, Princess Rarity is a Vampire Alicorn now. I mean, yes, Twilight is a Dragon Pony, and that's nice. However, vampires make everything better. Also, Twilight can't marry Rarity because clearly Princess Rarity and Flutterslave are the OTP.
Honestly, I think Rarity is a good character here. Yes, she's a villain, but she's an amazingly deep and complicated villain. I don't think she should marry Twilight, of course, but Twilight's raw awesome is beginning to be overshadowed by the drama that Rarity creates. Obviously the solution is to do something dramatic with Twilight. Like, I dunno... discover that the dragon had eggs so now Twilight has to take care of them?
Twilight! You must save Fluttershy! I have seen enough hentai to know where this is going. That bitch whore rarity (I still refuse to capitalize it) has poor, weak, naive, fragile, trusting, wimpy, oblivious, homely, simple, introverted Fluttershy so brainwashed, that she thinks she is not brainwashed. She is now nothing more than a mindless sex slave. That has to be the reason for her to believe that that ugly witch is anywhere near as perfect as you are.
Oh, good. No sense in having Twilight be downgraded to normal unicorn for any longer than necessary. Besides, now she's better than an alicorn. Now she's Dovahkiin!
...or something like that. Besides, now she can be an even more awesome mother figure to Spike.
As for the Rarilight, that's what TV Tropes likes to call Foe Yay. Some people can't help but see sexual tension in every adversarial relationship. There's just no helping them, it seems.
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Ah, but Pinkie's reality bending powers can allow her to compliment Twilight in ways and locations that normally wouldn't be possible. Think of Twilight brushing her luxurious mane while Pinkie watches adoringly from the other side of the mirror.
3550500 Fluttershy is quite happy where she is. She doesn't need saving. Princess Rarity is letting her pleasure her in ways Twilight cannot and will not ever understand due to her precious premarital purity. A true pony princess is a master of all things, including being awesome in the bedroom. I'm glad Rarity took Twilight's wings, it was time for the real princess to take the throne.
3551238 Fluttershy does not know any better, she is weak and simple minded. She may be happy, however, it is a false happiness. A sex slave is always happy, as long as it gets to please its master. Like a crack addict, willing to degrade themselves into committing acts of debauchery, theft, and murder just to get their fix. Fluttershy needs to get away from that horrible influence. Sure, it will be a long road to recovery, however, I am sure that the Glorious Princess Twilight Sparkle will be able to help poor, feeble Fluttershy out of the darkness that that bitch slut rarity has thrown her into.
3551485 Yes, but ignorance is bliss. Sweet, hot, sweaty bliss. Can Princess Dragonlight offer her that? I submit she will not, because she is too pure to do so. Only Rarity can offer her the freedom of being dominated utterly, in every possible way. Twilight can never be what Rarity is. When Rarity was good she was very good. But now that she is bad, she's better.
3551546 I see what has happened, that demon rarity has gotten her cloven hooves into you. Do not fret, though, the Divine Princess Twilight Sparkle can save you and absolve you of your sins. Let her divine righteousness wash away that wretchedness that that mother of all evil has cast upon you. If you do this, you will be accepted into her divine kingdom and allowed to frolic alongside the rest of the souls she has saved. All are welcome, all are welcome. Come, join her Holy Crusade, and let her blessings shine down upon you.
3551946 Never! Come, join team Rarity! We have kitties and dresses and cookies! Also parties. Even now Pinkie Pie has already joined the ranks without even needing to be brainwashed, she just heard Fluttershy was having a good time!
3552199 Your offer, while misguided, is sweet. However, I am quite happy serving at the right hoof of my pure, sweet Princess. Do not worry she will save you and Fluttershy. However, rarity can keep Pinkie Pie. With but a touch of her hoof, our Immaculate Princess Twilight Sparkle, will heal you of all your brainwashing and dementia. For you see, those "kitties" you speak of are actually capybara, and the chocolate chips is those cookies are, in actuality, cockroaches.
3552247 Goodness, you must think me quite the ruffian. I would never serve insects to my good friends, and the cats are my own dear Opalescence and Fluttershy's own pets. I assure you, as new best Princess I care deeply for my subjects, isn't that right, Fluttershy?
Oh, um... yes Princess Rarity. Would it be okay if I finished licking your hooves now?
Please, if you would be so kind. Oh, you are very good to me, Fluttershy.
Thank you!
Have no fear, Twilight will be spared. I intend to proper initiate the poor dear into the world of carnal delights. Her screams will be a symphony the likes of which the world has never heard!
3550158 No vampires do not make things better they make them worse! team Jacob 4ever
3550065 OOC; Judging by your user page, you're not biased, are you?
3550172 no Rarity is a shallow villain her only motivation is being evil no one should like her
3550500 No sex is bad please don mention it this story is rated E for a reason My mom would be so mad if they saw this sex is gross1
3550501 But if Pinkie is in the mirror that means there is less space for Twilight's reflection!
3552334 Get thee behind me, thou wicked temptress! It is written that the Holiest of Holies, Princess Twilight Sparkle, will smite you down to the bowels of hell, where you belong. Then after your defeat, her glorious reign will last a thousand years. No one will age or grow old further than they want to, no one will get sick or hurt. No one will be hungry, no one will be thirsty, all will bask in the glory of our benevolent Princess. Every day will be filled with peace and joy. It. Will. Be. PARADISE! Then, at the end of the thousandth year, when you finally escape from your hellish prison, with the slightest wave of her hoof, our glorious Lord, Princess Twilight Sparkle, will smite you down for the last time, defeating you forevermore. Then her kingdom shall last forever and ever. Amen.
3552547 OOC: Biased, you say? Only extremely. Flarity is a rare find.
3552547 You silly pony, that is how evil rarity is, she brings sex into an everyone rated story. She does not care, she is a horrible, horrible entity that must be defeated and destroyed for the good of all mankind and all ponykind.
If you know what I mean.
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Well, obviously Pinkie will be behind Twilight's reflection. She's just that good a friend.
>red streaks
>bat wings
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Presenting Evil Princess Vampire Alicorn Rarity!
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Will Twilight be able to stop this evil!? And save Fluttershy from her horrible torments??
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Find out next time at: The Twilight Sparkle show! Derailing the story is Magic!
Also, out of curiosity... If Twilight is princess of Magic... what is Rarity princess of? ... Evil? ...Vampires? ...Dresses?
3577498 She's Princess of Theft. She steals Twilight's magic, Fluttershy's free will, the limelight...
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Okay, that's both clever and true.
I support the Princess of Theft! She deserves her own My little OPony series and theme song.
3577536 Her theme song is the same as the normal one, but it's in Latin and there's a choral loop chanting "EEEEVIL" in the background.
This is actually starting to become pretty awesome. Dragonprincess Twilight VS Vampiricorn Rarity!
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I have so many questions....