The tragedy tag, it scares me.

And why is it anthro... if the cover image is a human Twilight? I know there are plenty of anthro pics of Twilight online.

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True but none were what I was looking for. After page ten of Google image you go with what you can get.

3402508 Try Derpibooru.

Dis gon be GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUD

here, found 2 quickly number 1

number 2

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The second one but the mods say no NSFW.

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
This is going to fast and it is confusing as hell but has everything i wanted it to have

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How is it confusing?

“Oh I’m just gonna tell Celestia that you and me are gonna get married.”

the smile on my face is causing me pain
Q: since Celestia is Spikes mommy in this (i support this theory) will she be demanding grand babies to spoil rotten once they are married?

A little chaotic at times but I still gave my vote up because there is a lot of hidden potential in here that I wish to see expanded in the future. Keep up the good work!

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There's a tragedy tag in this for a reason.

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But what about it is chaotic!? It makes perfect sense!

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well shit

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It's more of a "Well shit" sort of tragedy then Feelz ending.

3403602 I didn't say it doesn't make sense seeing as chaos is another kind of order, not opposition of it

What I mean by chaotic are those random flickers of emotions which turn from happy to sad, from sad to angry, from angry to sad again, which happen a lot. You have rare writing style, which would probably enable you to write great fics from Discord or Pinkie Pie POV, so I highly advise you do so!!

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OHH that... Well I contributed that to Spike's young age. In this P.O.V. he views thing much like a child would not following the emotions of other ponies until they were out right and blatant. That and Spike was distracted during most of this chapter.
Just wait for the sequel.

I can't wait for more!

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Did that clear up for you yet? In chapter two I accurately portraited Spike's age. For now it will only be his age... But you asked the right question. I didn't go into detail about their image, that serves a purpose.
You as the reader go in and immerse yourself in a world of literature to lose yourself for a bit. That's not what this story is about. This is about Spike and Twilight. They have seen each other, the know the ins and outs of the other. You wouldn't explain how your mom looks on a daily basis, and Twilight and Spike have done nothing that would require they explain anything about their physiology or at least Twilight hasn't... Yet. Now if say they were to perform an act that would require such detail I would put it, unfortunately that's not the case. Shame too my mental picture of Twilight is hot!! Spike... The man of my dreams!!

This my need a alternate reality tag.