She loved him, she loved him with all her heart but they could never be together or risk disaster. Twilight was left with an impossible choice. Stay and love him and loss him forever or do something... horrible.
How could this ever get flamed? It is genious! Well... Maybe not genious, but it is extremely well executed. Only one problem. I require a better descriptions for the characters. It is really confusing. You say they are antro characters, and Twilight does refers to herlself as a pony and Spike as a dragon. But there is no indication that Twilight has fur over her body, her magic horn or tail. Spike apparently isn't completely covered in scales and has a white skin. And he also doesn't seem to have a tail. So yeah... It gets confusing (to me at least) to imagine how this two are supposed to look like. You could also tell us hoe old they are. Becase "child" and "kid" are terms way to vague.
3405050 I'm with him on that. Great chapter, but the character description needs to be fixed. Namely, put horn, spikes, fur, scales, pony and dragon tails.
This is where the little bastard asks to do it more. I thought you were more innocent Spike, I guess I gave you too much credit. “Okay, have a good night.” Yeah have a good night indeed I knew he... He started to go to his own bed. What? He was going to bed... The little bastard was going to leave me unsatisfied! When I’m so damn close!? Not on my watch!
you're getting good at this, maybe i should publish something as well.
£10 says Spike knew exactly what he was doing the whole time
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only problem is Spike is too fucken small! dragon hertige remember twi waites to long it won't fit with out giving her a c sect in the process
Dayum! Me love this!
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Okay no hate.. Good. Expect the next chapter tomorrow. Though get ready for a shift.
This is really really good.
3399764 don't worry, im used to shift
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This story.......my nigga
no mare can resist the swagon dragon known as Spike
please give us MOAR!
This whole poison thingie which Spike licks from her fingers reminds me of a comic in derpibooru where exactly the same thing happened. xD
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That's where the inspiration came from.
How could this ever get flamed? It is genious! Well... Maybe not genious, but it is extremely well executed.
Only one problem. I require a better descriptions for the characters. It is really confusing. You say they are antro characters, and Twilight does refers to herlself as a pony and Spike as a dragon. But there is no indication that Twilight has fur over her body, her magic horn or tail. Spike apparently isn't completely covered in scales and has a white skin. And he also doesn't seem to have a tail. So yeah... It gets confusing (to me at least) to imagine how this two are supposed to look like.
You could also tell us hoe old they are. Becase "child" and "kid" are terms way to vague.
3405050 I'm with him on that. Great chapter, but the character description needs to be fixed. Namely, put horn, spikes, fur, scales, pony and dragon tails.
Cole, you're doing an amazing job with this, and Spike, he just broke the adorableness meter.
3401699 I love women reactions to this spike
This spike shod be in other stories
I especially like the while I'd gladly go to jail thing
Priceless dude, Loved that line and this chapter,