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Well. Shit has hit the fan. Again. You like doing this.
I think it's the first time a story made me hate ponies enough to want them all enslaved and tortured by mankind, I'm not joking the ponies need to feel how humanity is feeling in the story.
I was not expecting a chapter this quick. It was awesome. So mystery person WAS Amber. And Celestia's on the Human's side. As are Luna and Twilight, though Luna has a more personal connection with Matt. And the rebels are working with the princesses. Weirdish if you think about it, the rebels working with the highest authority figures. And now there's a figure Matt vaguely remembers from his dreams or something that seems evil. Maybe he's the guy that took Matt away from his parents? The guy also seems to have a deeper hate for humans than the rest of the more evil ponies we've met in this story do. Very interesting. Very interesting indeed. Oh, and, I know this is immature but... first comment.
the scare from - scar
I'll my best to help - I'll do my best to help
Please incorporate a human resistance group that works in the shadows to save everyone. Not a part of the NLR, more like an armed Red Cross.
As usual, This story is going amazingly. I only wish this chapter was a little longer.
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Dude, that's not a good way to be thinking. If you let it happen like that then it will end up being a never ending chain of pain and evil. Have you heard the saying, "those who don't learn from the past are doomed to repeat it?" Well, in that case it would also mean that humans would remember the pain of those times and not want it to happen to anyone else. Vengeance only leads to the same thing happening to you.
A very juicey chapter
Since this story is tagged romance, I'm wondering what future ships there will be. I'm assuming Matt will be falling with someone, being the main character and all. Maybe AJ, since we've seen her blushing some times when she thinks about Matt. Maybe Amber, since they have a past history and stuff.
Nice to see some of Matt's backstory.
First off, you need a new editor. The current one is failing horribly due to the numerous errors though out the story. Just putting this in MS Word and using its spelling checker would find most of them.
Second, what I wouldn't give for an M107, calm winds, a clear sky, a clear LoS and a single round. Celestia has no right to be leading anything for her conduct here. In fact, she should hang from the highest pole we can find for what she did. There is no excuse for it, and there is no justification.
4180706 What did Celestia do?
4179631 I think there is a resistance group but it's made of both humans and ponies. Also, there was some talk about "rebel humans" so there's probably a just human resistance group somewhere, too.
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Have you been reading the same story I have? The reason is pretty clear.
4225355 yay!
So celestia is against slavery?
So there were more slaves?
She gave him blood?
True, but then you would have consequences.
No. I’m not reporting back to you. I’ll report to my friends or the princesses.
F*ck you.
If it wasn’t for magic they wouldn’t be sh*t.