Me want MMMMMMOOOOORRRREEEE!!!!

Sweet.

Ink Heart's the bad guy! Amber has a fiancé and is pregnant! The evil law was made by Celestia's father! (I wonder why.) The Crystal Empire is gonna become a country where humans can be free! A princess isn't a king or queen (world building)! Amber used to have a crush on Matt! Matt and AJ are together! Lots of stuff happened! YAY!

i hope flash dies a horrible horrible death and ink heart too

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sorn-3DHTC8 FREEDOOOOMMMMM

Ouch. It hurt to read this chapter with all of the grammar and spelling errors in it... Verb tenses in several locations are wrong, "ageist" does not mean "in opposition to" (the word you're looking for is "against"), your dialogue grammar can use some work... I recommend getting a word processor that has a spelling and grammar check on it (like MS Word, even it would have pointed out almost all of the errors). This really needs to go through another round of editing.

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shadow ponies really are the dumbest bunch.
the moral is 'love and tolerate'.
they're end shall be truly karmic.

I wonder how matt will take it, that his childhood friend that he has feelings for belongs to another, he is already on the verge of being Suicidal with this dark voice that destroying him from the inside.
It will probably be the thing that will brake the camel's back for him.

As usual, I'm loving this story though Flash Sentry as one of the bad guys?

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Flash is being used for an evil gain, he's just a puppet.

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Applejack and Matt are not together.

4301813 That makes more sense to me.

hmm... i give it an 8 out of 10
good writing, great plot building, and an all around wonderfull story. the speech grates me a bit though, sometimes it doesn't seem realistic.... well as realistic as you can get in Equestria

"The only bodies recovered from the wreckage were of the humans, the ponies were never found." Celestia said taking a seat at the table "Meaning these rebels are being framed."

So only humans died?

"Then we shall discuss the passing of your new laws and make sure they still follow law your father created." Sunflower said.

What law did he create?

"Good." The hooded pony moved forwards towards the three other hooded ponies in the room "With this human saving the inbreed pony from death, we need to rethink our plans." The hooded pony removed his hoodie and the group nodded "Ink Heart, I need you try and delay anymore laws as you can." The stallion said.

Inbreed pony?

" That was a big fat lie ." Matt thought touching his eye with the scare " It still hurt when I kept my eye open for too long, but I couldn't let her know that. She felt bad enough as it was ."

Does it still hurt, now?

"Yeah, my mother told me these rings bonded a man and women together." She said "But those were stories her mother told her." She said pulling a small ring out of her pocket "My mother said this was a part of our family long before we were enslaved."

A wedding ring?

"Before you say anything Matt, I know for a fact this was an act of hate." Amber said speaking before Matt could "And you didn't deserve this."

What else would it be?

Celesita listened to them as the spoke highly human. She knew this human did in deed do a good deed today. The human himself reminded her of the past of when Humans and ponies lived in peace "Are you alright, sister?" Celestia's thoughts were interrupted by her younger sister. She looked over at her sister and gave her a warm smile.

Then, what happened?