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Capitalize the S.
You so- daughterofabitch
cell
Mentioning it was quick twice.
The L should be lowercase.
belonged
So did a human come out of that egg? Otherwise, it did not really answer her question.
‘‘wouldn't be lying here dead on the floor’’
Remove the ‘‘has’’.
spine
Put a comma between ‘‘on’’ and ‘‘Matthew's’’.
The syntax is so off that I do not even know what it is supposed to be.
there
Also, put a comma between ‘‘together’’ and ‘‘Matthew’’.
‘‘You don't say’’
there
Inconsistency.
due
Remove the S.
passed
(more of a joke) Does that mean humans there are born of 3 parents?
trials
walk
That’s a dirty trick.