3697710 Don't get me wrong, I loved your fic and I eagerly await the continuation of it, but sometimes it got a little daunting to have to read/wait 3 to 5 chapters for something to happen or be resolved, especially with the nice long chapters you had.
3697635 I know that, but he completely skipped over that max looks more like him and not like the other animal humans.
Dude. It took TWILIGHT FUCKING SPARKLE, a mare so dedicated to details that she wrote a checklist about creating a checklist to help create her weekly checklist, almost two months to figure that out. Richard was not only in pain from a dislocated shoulder, but also being carried by unicorn magic a bit away from Max. The differences aren't that noticeable unless under scrutiny. ...aaannnd I got snippy again, didn't I?
You should make ultrik go all physco and creep out song. Like write lists of what she needs like "You need more milk, you're running low on bread, you you're out of fruit". Also, human sign language, cant forget that. Perhaps correct/add to her journal entries. Draw creepy faces. Just do anything to tip of on his intellegence. My favorite scenario is that song takes him to twilights tree, where he see some math problems twilight cant solve (lets say hes extreamly good at math, you know character background) and just goes on a math problem solving rampage.
3702558 No offense to you, but that comment needed serious analyzing from me before I could comprehend what you were trying to communicate.
Anyway, the problem is Richard (Ulrich is his psyuedonym) does not want to show his intelligence yet due to baseless and crumbling fears of prolonged scientific 'study' involving laboratories and scalpels.
As for background, he is not the best in math, though he is a programmer. I doubt he'd be able to solve mathematical formulas for Twilight, especially if they take into account some strange thaumatogical concept. Which is entirely likely to happen.
Besides, as amusing as that would be, I got big plans for this story, and that just wouldn't fit.
teehee. this story! this is the first time ive been able to comment, and i must say, this story has me by the neck and its not showing any sign of letting go. but the possibilities! richard could mess with dr songs mind in so many ways! i am going to read the heck out of this story!
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Maddy Max, Maddy Max, Maddy Max can barely write!
3697718 b-but... It wasn't m-my fault...
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MADDY MAX, MADDY MAX, MADDY MAX CAN BARELY WRITE
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Don't get me wrong, I loved your fic and I eagerly await the continuation of it, but sometimes it got a little daunting to have to read/wait 3 to 5 chapters for something to happen or be resolved, especially with the nice long chapters you had.
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I know that, but he completely skipped over that max looks more like him and not like the other animal humans.
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Dude. It took TWILIGHT FUCKING SPARKLE, a mare so dedicated to details that she wrote a checklist about creating a checklist to help create her weekly checklist, almost two months to figure that out. Richard was not only in pain from a dislocated shoulder, but also being carried by unicorn magic a bit away from Max. The differences aren't that noticeable unless under scrutiny.
...aaannnd I got snippy again, didn't I?
You should make ultrik go all physco and creep out song. Like write lists of what she needs like "You need more milk, you're running low on bread, you you're out of fruit". Also, human sign language, cant forget that. Perhaps correct/add to her journal entries. Draw creepy faces. Just do anything to tip of on his intellegence. My favorite scenario is that song takes him to twilights tree, where he see some math problems twilight cant solve (lets say hes extreamly good at math, you know character background) and just goes on a math problem solving rampage.
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No offense to you, but that comment needed serious analyzing from me before I could comprehend what you were trying to communicate.
Anyway, the problem is Richard (Ulrich is his psyuedonym) does not want to show his intelligence yet due to baseless and crumbling fears of prolonged scientific 'study' involving laboratories and scalpels.
As for background, he is not the best in math, though he is a programmer. I doubt he'd be able to solve mathematical formulas for Twilight, especially if they take into account some strange thaumatogical concept. Which is entirely likely to happen.
Besides, as amusing as that would be, I got big plans for this story, and that just wouldn't fit.
teehee. this story! this is the first time ive been able to comment, and i must say, this story has me by the neck and its not showing any sign of letting go. but the possibilities! richard could mess with dr songs mind in so many ways! i am going to read the heck out of this story!