In the Third and final installment of The Shadow Trilogy, Twilight Shadow seeks to bend the world to the will of her mistress - Umbra. Can Princess Celestia find a way to save her in time, or is it far too late to do anything but the unthinkable...
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Another great chapter addition which only leaves me wanting more
Huzzah, an update.
Can't wait to see what will Celestia do...
THE DARKNESS MUST CONSUME ALL! A NEW ERA OF LEADERSHIP SHALL REIGN IN EQUESTRIA! ALL HAIL TWILIGHT SHADOW AND UMBRA!!
A weapon that took 2000 years in the making? It all sounds so simple, yet there is just something that must have required this time, this place, and for Twilight to get possessed by Umbra.
Such a complex plot...
The possibilites, the possibilites! It's really interesting to see, and know the possibilites...so hard not to know them.
This chapter just leaves us wanting more, but that's what you are aiming, hmm? ;)
Beautiful chapter. This is so interesting it always makes me wanting more. Unfortunately I´m already at the end of the chapter.
May the light forces win with Scootaloo as the leader.
Retribution and redemption is nigh!
REJOY-SUH, BROTHAS AHND SISTAHS, FOERUH THE GRAEHT GODDEHSUS OF THAH SUN AND MOON HAFF FINARY CAHM WITH-UH THE REHTORN OF THE GRHATE SAGE-UUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!
I noticed 2 things, but only remember one...missing a break between:
"...barrage of foul language.
But Moon Song..."
The second was just a missing word...if you want I can reread and find it again, but someone else might find it first anyhow.
Fantastical writing as always! You have finally inspired me to comment on your story!
I am quite excited to see how much Twilight's Shadow can evolve and curious to see Star Swirl's machinations unfold.
Admittedly, I am rooting for team Shadow! Please don't tell Celestia!
I was away for a bit so I didn't get a chance to comment on the last chapter. This chapter, and the previous, were amazing!
As always I am impressed by your writing skill and pacing. Jumping to this part of the story after seeing Roam assaulted and laid low just makes sense.
Keep up the awesome writing. I'm looking forward to how this all shakes out, though I am convinced there is no good ending to all of this.
Now that I've finally caught up with how far things have gone, I must say that I love the world you've built here. It feels well fleshed out already, and Twilight Shadow's intended campaign all but guarantees that we shall see more of it. Powers that be help those she marches on.
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All hail Celestia and Luna, the first of their names; Princesses of the Unicorns, the Pegasi, and the Earth Ponies, Ladies of the Three Tribes, and Protectors of the Realm.
All hail Caesar Scipio Grifficanus, Third Caesar of Roam and Defender of the Empire.
All hail Princess Mi Amore Cadenza, the first of her name; Ruler of the Crystal Empire, Regent of Equestria, and Champion of the Heart.
Its Moon Dancer. Not Moon Song.
It's a little annoying that you seem to have forgotten one of your own character's names.. you keep calling her Moon Song when she was originally called Moon Dancer.
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Woah, someone else reading this in 2019.
I thought I had completely missed something, the name suddenly being Moon Song