In the Third and final installment of The Shadow Trilogy, Twilight Shadow seeks to bend the world to the will of her mistress - Umbra. Can Princess Celestia find a way to save her in time, or is it far too late to do anything but the unthinkable...
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Woo! A donkey! I love donkeys, and they aren't very common in fanfics (despite the fact that there's more named donkeys/mules than griffons, which appear far more regularly). Will there be more donkeys later on?
Brilliant, I've been wondering how the Ponyville gang have been getting along. I am so very excited for the pitched battle coming up soon, there is going to be a great deal of flank-kicking on both sides. Also probably some heroic (and not so heroic) deaths, I am curious as to just who is going to kick the bucket - and how much frothing rage it will cause!
Whoah, this chapter... it showed how truly the mind have changed for them that has been touched by Shadow. The one that has been Gifted... the difference is so palpable, so... heavy. It was so obvious that even one that has a hard time reading atmosphere will read that, and see that.
Anyhow, it's another awesome chapter! :) Keep up the awesome work!
So the pieces are slowly (ever so slowly lol) coming together. I am still wondering about that bar tender. Yes nothing direct has come about from him but something about that scene in the set up makes me think that the bartender, and by extension the conversation with Pinkie, will somehow be significant in some fashion. Just not really sure in what way yet.
Interesting what is going on back home and with the elemental bearers. We seem to have three characters who at least on the surface seem to be fully enthralled in Twilight, Rarity, and Rainbow dash. Of those two we have seen internal monologue that seem to show that they are fully in the thrall of the shadow. Rarity in fact seems to be treated similar to Twilight and likes it for instance. Rainbow Dash at least appears to be fully in thrall but we do not have any internal view to know for sure but all outside view points seem to suggest that.
On the other hand we have three bearers that I am not as sure about. Applejack, despite what Rarity seems to think, appears to be acting strange as she is being subservient and does not appear happy. She also only talks to Rainbow Dash. She may be fully in thrall but it may not be as strong as the others though she may also be too broken to do anything either. Fluttershy seems to be angry about something but we don't know what. It could be something unrelated to the shadow or it could be related to the shadow (hence why she is so short with Rarity and other shadow followers during these times). Pinkie clearly enjoys her lack of inhibitions but she is also still clearly upset about Mr. Cake and she seems to have enough personal initiative to think about it. Whether that leads to anything I don't know but it does offer possibilities.
But wait, if
GentleCrescent Blade is going off to the Crusader camp, who will command the ninety-nine Ki-Lin warriors still in Canterlot?Huzzah! More scenes of decadence with the corrupted Mane Six! AKA 80% of the reason I'm still following this fic!
But the other parts are good too. Really. >.>
In all honesty, though, I'd gladly follow a fic that consisted of nothing but the corrupted Mane Six abusing their newfound shadow powers and complete lack of inhibitions.
3504957 I might write a bunch of that someday just for kicks. Keep your eyes peeled. It'll probably be AFTER The story is finished though.
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Luna is keeping them In Canterlot until she can convert them.
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Business is about to pick up real soon. We needed this slow opening to set the stage properly.
Let there be Discord soon.
If you don't mind that is.
Fluttershy seems to have kept a peace of her mind, and is waiting for Discord to come help, so why isn't he
Finally a little bit of Shadow to keep us all interested!
I await the day of discord with great anticipation.
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Yes, I've been waiting to see the fun perspective of things for a while!
3508143 Hey, the fic is titled "Twilight WAR" Not "Twilight Orgy."
If you want the second one, I'll need to see enough interest for it.
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I like both! Maybe you could do some side stuff about ponyville and how its residents adapt to the changes?
3508188 Right now Im juggling three different projects, but we'll see. Given that a seriously massive chapter is coming up, I might do a couple intermission chapters with the sexystuff.
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*chuckles* that is the river of life. It will never submit to your will
I suspect SilverĀ“s love will help Scootaloo when the Shadow tries to corrupt her.
Oh, all of the Discord teasing.
When shall this torment end?! When shall the Good Draconequus go to War and Umbra pay for her unforgivable transgressions against all of Equestria? When shall the world finally observe the Day of Chaos that will bring it out of the corrupting grasp of the Shadow?
Only time will tell, and we can but now sharpen our blades, and our hearts, and our minds, and show the Dark Sun that we will never submit under her gaze, neither in this world nor the next!
The Legion Stands! The Crusade comes for you, Twilight, and by the justice of the Light, we shall have retribution!
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