In the Third and final installment of The Shadow Trilogy, Twilight Shadow seeks to bend the world to the will of her mistress - Umbra. Can Princess Celestia find a way to save her in time, or is it far too late to do anything but the unthinkable...
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Whisper? But why?
Perhaps I'm just terribly blind, but how are there flaws in this chapter? That the White Doe would save the Changelings and then transfer them over to Cadence is nothing odd. That Cadence would forgive her mortal enemies like that is not odd either. Perhaps I'm looking at the wrong things.
Either way, this was a good chapter and a bit creepy as well. What kind of power is Whisper in control of that could cause such a massive storm? Or is it something to do with Luna or Celestia? It is a tad confusing there. Good work though and good luck on the next chapter.
Damnit, why can't Celestia just Mare up, punch Umbra in the face, and go fuck Twilight silly already!
There's a few typos but for once I was too tired to pluck them into notepad so...might come back later. Dunno. There's a few other things of note like quotation marks and an ambiguity at the end. I should NOT read when I'm this tired because I'm too lazy to explain myself.
Not sure what was flawed about the chapter. I think you're too picky.
So the snow storm was caused by Whisper? I had my money on Windigos. I mean, they feed on strife and conflict. There has been plenty of that lately what with Roam falling and the Griffin Empire falling under siege, the Changeling Swarm being ripped apart, and half of Equestria's thoughts turning to war. The Harmony that drove them off so long ago is fading away.
I am curious...last chapter you put in a two week jump. Are we going to go back and see what everyone else has been doing in that two week period? Seems odd that Celestia hasn't talked with Whisper about the coming winter for two whole weeks.
Whoa, whoa, whoa, what. just. happened. O.O And... Whisper is the one that is causing the freak storm? Hm... why would she do that? And what she thought about Celestia/Amaterasu... hm... this just feels all the more suspicious.
And how did the snowflake taste that Starswirl even know that he knew that it's from Jade Whisper?
3806290 3806787 Odd indeed.
Something, perhaps, to look forward to in the next chapter.
TUNE IN NEXT TIME, TRUE BELIEVERS.
Am I the only one who realizes the Crystal Empire is virtually unguarded despite it being clearly stated to effect all of Equestria? Twilight revives Sombra and takes the empire plunging all of Equestria into despair. Not to mention with Sombra on their team dark sun is guaranteed victory. Umbra is stronger than Celestia hands down because Nightmare Moon was able to defeat her with ease. Twilight can take on luna at this point and Sombra will be a perfect anti-Star Swirl
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I don't think Nightmare Moon was stronger than Celestia. Nightmare Moon was still Luna. Celestia loved Luna and would have certainly held back for fear of harming her. Nightmare Moon didn't hold back though and thus their fight would have been one sided, at least until the Elements came into play.
Twilight is far away from the Crystal Empire and would have to take control of the Equestrian rail system to get up there. Canterlot is in much greater peril than the Crystal Empire.
As for Sombra, well, he hasn't even been brought up yet. Twilight hasn't even put him on the list of baddies she wants to "save" everyone from. Odds are he may not appear in this story at all.
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Wait...what was odd? That Whisper is making the winter storm, that I thought the Windigos were involved, or that we don't know what everyone else was up to during the two week jump? You can't just say something is odd when I brought up several points in my comment! I need to know which one was odd.
Well, this is a welcome development. So Chrysalis officially joins the Good Guys (TM). Now all we need is Sombra and maybe Sunset Shimmer to complete the set!
Or, to go for sheer, pure refuge in audacity, release some of those nasty little beasties in Tartarus and let them fight it out against the Shadow.
I also wonder what role the dragons will play, if they'll be playing any at all.
I also see now flaws in this chapter. I´m gald Cadence didn´t go the easy way and killed a whole species but well that would have been shortsighted and foolish of her. You might be a bit too hard to yourself.
I wonder what game Whisper is playing
Because having her most faithful student/ daughter figure turned into a Well Intentioned Extremist is not cruel enough for Celly. Let´s add her new marefriend too.
Wait, so Twilight+Umbra can't teleport their new hive, but the White Doe can zip around all story with impunity, even in front of the biggest powerhouse villains, and transplant all of Chrysalis's survivors straight into the Equestrian Capital? How is this even a fight; this is like Lord of the Rings but the good guys have the Ring Wraiths and like ten Gandalfs and Sauron just a few platoons of Orcs.
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I know this is a ‘few’ years late, but damn it I want to talk to someone about this fic It’s likely is to do with the charged green gem Chrysalis finds, and losing 75% of the hive, of which Umbra would have to carry now instead,