In the Third and final installment of The Shadow Trilogy, Twilight Shadow seeks to bend the world to the will of her mistress - Umbra. Can Princess Celestia find a way to save her in time, or is it far too late to do anything but the unthinkable...
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Dun, dun duu?
A charge into a canyon..... yea not the best strategy even if you come from the tops of it as well.
Just saying.
Still loving the series and dear god i just read the last 2 in as many days.
I spy with my little eye a reference to The Wheel of Time, perhaps.
Also, can't Cadence tell who Discord is in love with?
And now I do wonder if there will be... epic battle between Trixie and Twilight. Because I got the feeling of what is the possibilities of Trixie's debt... and I just hope I'm right, because if that's so... yeah, I can say I'm liking her personality
And now the villain is on the move! And the protagonist! I do wonder who will win... hmm
Great chapter! I'm glad that Ponyville got locked down by the Guard. The last story ended with Canterlot not doing much and I was worried that they would continue with the 'sit back and do nothing' plan.
I'm dying to know if Discord has any plan to get around that agreement with Umbra. I'm kinda curious as to the consequences of breaking it...
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My three favorite commenters. *Sniff* I missed you guys.
ALso - MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH prepare for awesomeness!
3336988 Keep spying, there's going to be more of them. (Because references are FUN!)
I hope you don't make it a one sided battle where the shadow forces win easily.
3338135 Like I said - there was a derp in pre-release editing that I didn't catch because I forgot to run my name checker. That was my stupid, and Im sorry it slipped through.
3337783 You may be one hundred percent certain that is NOT what's going to happen.
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Yay! I have been missed!
Looking forward to the wild ride I know this will be!
I've only just recently come across this series, and did a massive marathon reading to get myself caught up. A ripping good yarn thus far, I look forward to seeing how you handle the massive battles that are about to happen.
I get the feeling that whatever it is that Moon Dancer is planning, she will rightly earn the title "Magnificent Bastard", no matter if it actually works or not. And Winterlight's "Just As Planned" moment is either going to be AMAZING, or blow up hilariously in her face...
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Ahm... you really should read up on Jeanne d'Arc. Not only had she "visions" in her teens (with 13 years, the "holy Katharina" apperead, and later "archangel Michael" and the "holy Magareta". Yea, these are the german names; it`s too late at night to search for the english ones.), she also was 17 (2 years before she died), before she first even tried to get any military or political influence.
And with 17, you could be considered mature... if there wasn't this thing with the visions...
So we have a mentally unstable girl, getting leadership for two years tops, who dies a horrible death at the hands of her enemys... I can see, how that proves your point.
(Sorry for the snark, but I hate it, if people don't inform themself, before blabbing nonsens)
Also, at all religious people: I fully respect your faith,and everything else that comes with beliving in god. But to put anyone who claims to have seen an archangle(or a vision of anything else supernatural) at the top of the military is just insane.
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Out of curiosity, what IS The cliched path?
Also, if you really want to throw money at me...
I REEEEEEEEEAAAAAAALLLLLY hope you manage to pull off more stupid moments. May I suggest Something involving Rainbow Dash and cider?
... and then Trixie is the actual hero of the story
Reminds me of the Scarlet Crusade from WoW, only problem with that is that they wanted to eradicate all undead. My race is undead...
The one ending I don't want happening, is the Shadow being defeated and Twilight surviving... If that does happen, make her go bat-shit insane from all the stuff she did or something. Or you can just let the Shadow win, I haven't seen a story so far where the Equestrians lose and something else rules over them xD
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Reminds me of the Scarlet Crusader in Hearthstone and her summoning cry.
Looks like Scoot's got some divine protection.
3344746 I know the feeling but there are other tails where she dos good