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Without a Life

I don't think I'll be updating too often, because of school. I'm (not) very creative, so I'll probably be updating faster at the start, when I get to imagine Spark's biological parents without having to copy someone else's work.

This is Phoenix_Dragon's Without a Hive story from Spark's point of view.

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MasterNotWriter6626

MasterNotWriter6626 #1 · Sep 28th, 2013 · · ·

How does Phoenix_Dragon make such long chapters?

Jphyper

Jphyper #2 · Sep 29th, 2013 · · ·

You'd better start learning to write longer chapters, too. The pacing was a bit off, so the chapter went by much faster than it should have. They don't have to be as long as the ones in the original stories, but they definitely need to be longer than this in order to work. Why don't you ask Phoenix_Dragon for advice? I don't just mean with the writing process itself-- it might be a good idea to do a little bit of collaboration with the original author to help avoid plot holes.

MasterNotWriter6626

MasterNotWriter6626 #3 · Sep 30th, 2013 · · ·

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Mhmm. Yeah, I'm going to put it on hiatus and that first chapter is not going to be the official first chapter. Not on my watch is a chapter with 1,402 going to be the official chapter. This story was just kind of an experiment. I'm putting it on Hiatus for now.