Broken pony

by NineTailedWriter

A Short Ending

After a few months, there is now slight changes in each of these ponies lives.

Bunny: Has had memories flood back to her, and now has a place in the Canterlot Castle.
Twilight: Is still i love with Bunny. and visits her as much as she can.
Luna: Is happy with her life long (only) friend.
Pinkie: Takes the crusaders with her to Canterlot at least once a month, to see Bunny and Luna.
Crusaders: Continue to try to get their cutie marks and look forward to every visit to Canterlot.
Celestia: Continues to do nothing ._.

-----------------------------THE END-----------------------

Author's Note:

This is so bad -facehoof-
Considering its my first story.. i hope u like it, thank you for reading, and im sorry about the wierd ending ._. I have a life and i have not been paying attention to it when i started (typing) writing this..

Bunny Twinkles = Wierd name.. but is my OC.. so please dont use her (your not going to but whatever..) without my permission .-.

anyway..
Thanks for reading,
Hope you enjoyed,
This is my first story,
so look out for my next one..

um.. great poem right? :P

NineTailedWriter

Comments

[Soft Shell]

Wow, 9/25
So you uhh, been workin on this a while?

[Big Baby]

Oh the grammar.....sweet merciful Mary the grammar

[NineTailedWriter]

3431122
I know I'm really bad with grammar... I would fix it but I'm so lazy...

3430775
9/25 ?
Well uh.. at least its not a 1.. and this is my first one ok?! I will get better i promise.

And not really.. It just took longer than I expected it too..

[Soft Shell]

3432987
I was refering to the date silly not your score.
September is the ninth month so 9/25 is when you started.