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Three new colts come into town! Including Fluttershy's little brother, Zippy, an admirer of Twilight Sparkle, Merlin and Pinkie Pie's nephew, Jinkie Pie! What could happen between them? Based on characters created by DoctorXFizzle.

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Comment posted by AIRFIGHTER deleted Aug 7th, 2013

I used the italian theme song :D:twilightblush:

randomness 1 FLUTTERRAGE
Cinnamon Twist: Hey Fluttershy!
Fluttershy:What Cinnamon?
Cinnamon:Youre a weak hearted,cry baby,filly.
Fluttershy::fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::fluttershysad::fluttercry:
Cinnamon:See, there you go crying for you little mommy!
Fluttershy:HOW DARE YOU!:flutterrage: kicks his weak spot
cinnamon::pinkiegasp::applecry:
Fshy:Now whos the baby?

Iago shouldn't have broken the fourth wall.

Aw.. another cute story my friend. The part with them angering DT was priceless. :rainbowlaugh::heart:

Great story. I love all three of those colts, they are cute. :twilightblush:

3007572 yea, only Pinkie can do that lol.

Not bad, but not quite as good as some of your other stories. Your O.C.'s aren't introduced all that well, we don't really know much about them aside from what they look like. :eeyup:

"It's okay if you're sometimes scared, being brave doesn't mean doing something dangerous like this. I myself sometimes act tough, but that's because I'm sometimes scared too."

That reminds me of what Mafusa said to Young Simba in Disney's The Lion King. "Being brave, doesn't mean you go looking for trouble." :twistnerd:

3007572 hey its iago what did want a cranky bird?

I like this story. Make more.

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