wow you sir have a spot on my fav's list

Putting this to read later, this interests me some. I'll be back with comment with my opinion.

You earned a watch and a fav

The stallion focused on keeping his composer.

A little heads up, it'd be "composure". I know the words sound kinda the same with some dialects, but y'know, they're different.

The stallion focused on keeping his pony who wrote music.

If'n yet get me. Otherwise, I'd advise against using * in writing, it looks a bit off, I'd much rather get creative with the narrative and some onomatopoeia. Otherwise, this looking really good. Thanks for writing it, mate.

So long as I get my cheesy romance, I'll follow this. Oh, and a word of advice: the tragedy and comedy tag don't mix well. I would suggest replacing the tragedy tag with a dark tag instead.