Upheaval: Reckoning
Chapter 13: The Royal Guard
News of Terrato's, and Celestia’s, arrival quickly spread throughout Canterlot. By morning, the city was abuzz with rumors. Nopony, save for Princess Luna and the highest-ranked among the Royal Guard, had actually seen the two, but the prospect of finally having Princess Celestia address her subjects was both reassuring, and disconcerting. Likewise, the chance to meet this Prince Terrato.
With such important events centering on the capital, the Royal Guard was swamped with complications. A few hours after Celestia and Terrato arrived, a small group of ponies teleported into the palace as well. The prince explained that they were some of his legionnaires on an important mission. The Royal Guard was more than a little suspicious. The last time the palace witnessed the arrival of strange, armed ponies, nearly a dozen stallions were killed. Now, with barely a clear explanation as to what happened that time, they were expected to work with these ponies.
Representatives of the two martial organizations met inside the planning room of the Royal Guard’s barracks. The legionnaires had come unarmed as a show of good faith. The Royal Guard, however, had no shortage of spears. The legionnaires explained that their fellows that had previously attacked the palace were mind-controlled agents of the new alicorn, Black Rose, and that they were not of the same sort.
For Shining Armor, it didn't help that the legionnaire he was talking to was covered in black armor from head to tail, that the eyes that stared out of the armored slits were a feral red, or that the pony spoke in a growling, wolfish voice when he introduced himself as “Captain Vanguard Clash of the Northern Equestrian Legion, Special Operations, Third Squad”. Shining Armor accepted the offer of a hoofshake, though. If there was going to be a breach in relations between Terrato’s guards and Celestia’s, it wasn't going to start with him, or Bright Shield. “Captain Shining Armor of the Royal Guard, Unicorn Division,” he replied. “This is Captain Bright Shield of the Pegasus Division. It’s an honor to work with the ponies who defend our borders.”
“The feeling is mutual towards the ponies who maintain order within the heart of Equestria,” Vanguard said. He glanced at the other ponies lined up behind him. While they all wore some barding, none were as heavily armored as this one. They remained completely expressionless except for one dark blue unicorn who looked at him a little too intensely. When she noticed him paying attention to her, a playful smile curved her lips. “The prince has ordered a few squads from Special Operations to work with the Royal Guard,” Vanguard continued. “We are to update you on Equestria’s enemies, especially Black Rose, and her Thorns, assist with the merging between our two organizations, and ensure that the prince’s address tomorrow will go smoothly. We’d appreciate it if you tell us about potential problem spots in this city for tomorrow’s address.”
“We’re still unclear about how this merge is supposed to happen,” Bright Shield said. “From what Princess Luna has been saying, it seems that the Equestrian Legion will be absorbing the Royal Guard completely.”
“That is correct,” Vanguard replied.
“That’s absurd!” Bright Shield said. “The Royal Guard has been protecting Equestria as an organization for centuries! Now, you’re just going to dissolve it into your group?”
“I’m not here to debate history with anypony, Captain Bright Shield," Vanguard said. "I have my orders, and I’m sure you have yours.”
Bright Shield ground his teeth. Vanguard was right. He did have his orders. Both princesses had already told the Royal Guard about their plans to merge the two groups. He had another retort, but a raised hoof from Shining Armor held him back. “You’re fine with this?” he asked.
Shining Armor closed his eyes.
“I will be fine here,” Celestia said once she entered her room. “Thank you, both of you.”
Both captains saluted, and turned to leave.
“Shining Armor!”
Shining Armor stopped while Bright Shield kept on going.”Yes, your highness?” he asked.
Celestia trembled with fatigue. “I’m sorry,” she said. “What I did to your sister was wrong. Please, forgive me.”
Shining Armor’s lips twisted slightly, the only sign of the emotion that Celestia stirred up. “I can’t,” he said. “Not yet, your highness.”
“Shining Armor--“
“It was hard enough to accept that you banished Twiley because she had done something wrong," Shining Armor said. It took all he could to keep emotion from affecting his voice. "Now, it turns out that you threw her into danger even when she hadn't. Not only that, I have to find out that you've been lying to me since the day I was born.”
Celestia tried to take a step forward, and stumbled. Shining Armor was by her side in a heartbeat. “I’m surprised you still show this much concern,” she said.
“I swore an oath to serve when I took this position.” Shining Armor’s face softened a bit. “Just…give me some more time, your highness. I need to take this all in. I can’t forgive you just yet.”
“Thank you for that much.”
“No,” Shining Armor replied when he opened his eyes again. He stared at Vanguard as he spoke. “Not really, Bright Shield, but Captain Vanguard Clash is right. We have our orders. The Royal Guard will cooperate with the Equestrian Legion.”
“I must admit I was expecting a lot of resistance from the Royal Guard,” Vanguard said. “Your cooperation is appreciated, Captain Shining Armor.”
“But we’ll do so with our eyes open,” Shining Armor said. “I’d like to know how the Legion deals with ‘problem spots’ before I share any information. Forgive me, but I was part of the clean up when some of your rogue troops attacked this palace.”
“We will observe for the most part, leaving any domestic issues with the Royal Guard,” Vanguard replied. “We will act if we determine that Black Rose’s agents are involved. Things should remain in simple arrests unless Black Rose decides to escalate matters.”
“Good.” Shining Armor said. He hid a sigh of relief. The mere sight of these legionnaires enforcing the laws they knew would cause more unrest in Canterlot. “Now, about this Black Rose…”
Vanguard turned towards one of his companions, who gave him a sheaf of papers.
Tomorrow came about swiftly, far too swiftly for Luna. She doubted that a few hours of rest would be enough for Celestia, who walked the halls with her weakly. Part of her dearly wanted to postpone the event. Terrato made no secret of his dislike for the ponies of Canterlot. It was quite likely that the ponies of Canterlot won’t like him either. She envisioned a lot of things going wrong. If Canterlot’s inhabitants refused to listen, and started resisting, Terrato would certainly order the Legion to subdue them violently, if he didn't simply crush them all in anger.
Yet, it was better to get this out of the way. The longer it took for them to address the ponies of Equestria, the longer the unrest would brew. She looked ahead, and saw that Terrato was already waiting by the palace’s entrance along with a contingent of royal guards. She looked around suspiciously, noting that not a single legionnaire was in sight. What had her brother put them up to?
“About time you got here,” Terrato said. He looked towards Canterlot’s main plaza where he and his sisters were to make their address. Luna followed his gaze. Even from where they were, they could see ponies gathering.
They flew off together. Below, a few ponies still walking the streets gasped, and pointed at them.
The plaza was abuzz with the worried chatter of ponies when they reached it. On the ground, some royal guards blew their trumpets to signal their arrival. A hush fell upon the crowd as the they them landed on an elevated platform. Luna observed the reactions closely: shock, confusion, and a great deal of fear. The whispers among themselves were telling.
“Is that the Prince Terrato we keep hearing about?”
“He’s so big! And his mane is on fire!”
“He’s gray like a tombstone!”
“He looks angry, is he going to attack us?”
“Where is Princess Celestia?”
“Isn't she the one at the center?”
“That can’t be! The princess’s mane isn't pink!”
“But she looks every bit like the princess except for the mane. Didn't Princess Luna say that her powers were stolen by an enemy?”
“I don’t know, she looks…smaller. Do princesses shrink when they lose power?”
“Shush! She’s about to speak!”
Luna could understand why the ponies of Canterlot even doubted that their princess had come back. Celestia had not changed in size at all. She seemed smaller because she lacked presence, something caused by two things at the moment: her loss of power, and the prospect of finally facing her subjects for the first time after the division’s end.
“My dear subjects…” Celestia said. She spoke through a microphone. Normally, this would not be necessary. The Royal Canterlot Voice was all it took to address a large crowd, but that required a degree of magic that she did not have to spare. This was not lost to the crowd, particularly the royal guards stationed around, and among them. “Today will mark the beginning of a new period for Equestria. For more than a thousand years, I partitioned the realm into two parts in a misguided attempt to protect ponykind.”
Luna found herself breathless. Celestia had mentioned before that she had been too hasty in judgment, but this would be the first time ever that she would admit that the barrier was wrong. Terrato looked like he had noticed as well.
“That partition is over. My sister has already told you of the troubles that have been hidden from you for so long. I now stand here to confirm them.”
There were no overt reactions from the crowd, but Luna could feel a collective sigh come from them. When she had spoken to them of the situation, they had listened earnestly and tried to understand, but she knew that part of them still hoped that whatever bad thing that was happening would blow over and they would not be needed. Celestia’s words hammered in the reality that such a thing was not going to happen.
“Equestria needs your help, my little ponies,” Celestia went on. “The Equestrian Legion, led by my brother, Terrato, has come here today for your support.” She looked towards Terrato, who kept his eyes on the crowd.
“Don’t believe her!” a stallion shouted from afar. Everypony’s eyes went towards the one who spoke. By the edges of the plaza, a white unicorn stallion with a blond mane walked slowly towards the crowd. Luna recognized Blueblood, a rather annoying, but mostly harmless "Royal Nephew". From the way he was acting now, “harmless” might have to be reconsidered. “That’s not Princess Celestia!” Blueblood shouted. “It doesn't even look like her!”
A deep growl came from Terrato. She placed a hoof by his shoulder in response. “Big brother, please," she whispered. "No earthquakes, or ‘surprise volcanoes’. This city is dangling by a cliff, remember?”
Terrato let out a snort, and relaxed. “I know,” he said.
“The real Princess Celestia would never force us to join some army, and go off to a land we've never seen!” Blueblood shouted. “This one must be a fake being controlled by those two behind her!”
Luna stepped forward. “This is the real Princess Celestia!” she said. “I've already explained why she looks like this!”
Blueblood sneered. “A likely story! I never trusted your so-called conversion! This is a Nightmare Moon plot! She’s trying to recruit us into her army!”
“I believe her,” another pony said. This one didn't shout like Blueblood, but his voice carried clearly through the crowd. Everypony turned to look, and found Captain Shining Armor standing next to a squad of unicorn royal guards by the opposite side of where Blueblood was. “I’ve been with the princesses long, and often enough. I know the real Princess Celestia when I see her. In fact…” He turned his gaze towards Celestia. “She’s more real now than she’s ever been!”
“How can we trust you?” Blueblood asked. “Aren't you the same pony who was fooled by the changeling queen?”
“And thus the one who’s even more vigilant than before!” Shining Armor shot back. “What’s really going on here, Blueblood? Are you really doubtful of the princess’ identity, or are you that scared of the draft?”
“Who isn't afraid of the draft here?” Blueblood replied. He looked around him. “Who wants to be part of some army and work,” he shuddered, “for a prince they've never met?”
“I’d fight for Equestria!” a third pony shouted from the crowd. A light yellow stallion, still wearing the uniform of a café worker stepped up. “That’s what it’s all about right?” Several ponies next to him nodded.
“How can we be sure it’s for Equestria, and not the private army of Nightmare Moon?” Blueblood asked. Some of the nobles walked over to him as a show of agreement. “Why can’t they just get the Royal Guard, and leave us alone?”
“Nightmare Moon’s long gone!” another pony shouted. “I’m siding with Captain Shining Armor! That’s the real Princess Celestia, and she really needs our help!”
The crowd erupted into a confused argument while the guards struggled to maintain control.
“I have a family to care for, and a business to run! I can’t join this Legion forever!”
“Equestria’s in danger, and we've been called to help! I say anypony who refuses to be drafted is a coward!”
“The nobles don’t want to move their rears, and help out! What can you expect from those hoity-toity do-nothings?”
“Let the rabble join up! Surely their numbers will make up for all the ponies needed!”
“I still can’t believe we've been lied to for so long! How do we even trust this Legion?”
A powerful boom, like the distant crack of thunder, or a far away eruption, came from Terrato when he clapped his front hooves together. It rolled through the crowd, and silenced them in an instant.
Once he got the crowd’s attention, Terrato stepped forward. “I am Prince Terrato of Equestria,” he said. His words rumbled like a distant earthquake. Unlike Celestia, he had no problem projecting his voice. “It seems a lot of you have issues over not knowing who I am. There will be plenty of time to do that, given that I’m not going anywhere.” His gaze swept over the crowd. Seeing them cower was an annoyance, but he kept his voice even. “For a long, long time I have protected this land from its enemies. If you have doubts, come forth, and I will take you to see them for yourself.” He paused, waiting for somepony to accept his offer. Celestia and Luna gazed nervously at him during the silence. Nopony stepped forward, yet one more source of annoyance. He put on a smile when he continued. “I am glad to meet all the ponies I have been defending for the first time. My sisters have done well in caring for you during their reign, regardless of the mistakes we have made. A lot of you fear the Legion. I understand that. But what you should fear is what would happen if it falls. The Legion and I cannot protect Equestria by ourselves for much longer. Though it pains us to do so, we have to call upon all of you to do your part.”
Terrato paused again to let his words settle in. Many among the crowd were whispering among themselves. He heard the doubts, and the hesitation. Some changes had to happen on the spot. “I must also add that your service to the Legion need not be permanent. All ponies recruited during the draft will be allowed to leave, and go home once the worst has come to pass. I am confident that plenty will stay once they see the necessity, and nobility, of the Legion’s work.” Terrato glanced at his sisters, and relished the surprise on their faces. “I am asking for a lot of things from all of Equestria now. I ask for your cooperation for we will all fall without it. I ask for your forgiveness. Your rulers have made grave mistakes, and continue to pay for it. Most of all, I ask for your courage. The future ahead is dark, but we can go through this together.”
The crowd was silent after that. No more whispering among themselves this time. “Count me in!” somepony from the crowd shouted. Others quickly picked up on it, and yelled their agreement. The crowd came to life with determined cries.
Luna stepped closer towards her brother. “See?” she said. “Not so full of fops after all.”
“Maybe,” Terrato said. There were some ponies were not so eager to join. Many nobles bunched together around Blueblood, and watched the crowd in horror. While Luna saw the crowd’s willingness, he saw the pockets of resistance. Small groups of ponies were trying to get away from the crowd, and fall back to their homes or, perhaps, to get away from the city itself. That wasn't going to work, he had already scattered his eyes and ears throughout the city’s potential hiding places, and exits. It shouldn't be hard with the Royal Guard’s cooperation.
“You surprised me,” Luna said. “I read from your laws that joining the Legion was permanent.”
“The old rules don’t cut it anymore,” Terrato said. “These ponies need hope. They need to see their joining as a service they have to give for now, not a fate they are irrevocably condemned to.”
“Will the same be true for the Elements of Harmony?”
Terrato let out a snort. “They weren't drafted, they joined up on their own, even though we discouraged them. I’m off for now, little sister, I have to coordinate with the legionnaires waiting to enter the cities, and I need to have a strict hoof on these things.”
Luna nodded. “Of course, big brother.”
With a flap of his wings, Terrato took to the air.
After the address had finished, the princesses stayed to talk with the ponies on a more personal level. Luna had feared that the Heartland’s ponies would be resentful, and angry. That they would demand some sort of physical punishment for Celestia, or even demand that she step down from her throne. The very nature of the Heartland kept either from happening. Heartland ponies did not believe in swift and merciless vindication as the ponies of the Barrier Lands did. Punishments were rare, and they were certainly not turned into public events like Terrato’s executions. These ponies had also spent so long in Celestia’s benevolent rule that they could not imagine what their life would be outside it.
Whatever the reason, the ponies that approached Celestia were not of the vengeful or angry sort. Luna was glad for it. Having the ponies of the Heartland turn on her now would break Celestia’s heart. Instead, they showed concern over Celestia's loss of power, and promised their support. Terrato would have called them naïve, but their naiveté helped now more than any sense of worldliness.
Unfortunately, that wasn't going to be the case each and every time in the Heartland. It wasn't even so here in Canterlot. Luna looked to the far side of the plaza, where the Royal Guard was dealing with a group of nobles led by Blueblood. She wished that they were an isolated case, but they were likely only the first of several.
"No!" Blueblood said with a tilt of his chin. "I refuse to join! I am a prince of Equestria, and I will not be reduced to working with common soldiery!"
Several of the royal guards scowled, and stepped forward, but they were stopped by one of their captains. Shining Armor shared in his ponies' desire to show Blueblood that he was talking to "common soldiery" at the moment, and they didn't appreciate his tone, but he kept his feelings aside. "Nopony's asking for your permission, Blueblood," he said. "The draft is mandatory, and you're going to represent your family."
"Is there no way at all to avoid this 'draft'?" another noble asked. "Perhaps we can hire somepony to go in our place. Maybe a generous donation to the right pony?"
"I'm going to ignore that you just asked if you can bribe somepony," Bright Shield replied. He allowed a hint of anger to creep into his voice. "The answer to your other question is no. Everypony will do his or her part. You can't hire somepony to do your part for you. For now, we ask that all of you return to your homes, and wait for the actual draft. Don't try to skip out of this, the penalties are stiff."
Most of the nobles left, nearly all of them deflated by the response. Blueblood stayed, however. "I am still royalty," he said. "If money won't exempt from the draft, blood will."
Shining Armor grabbed Blueblood by the lapels, and forced him to look at Celestia. "This crisis has taken from Princess Celestia herself," he snapped. "What makes you think her nephew's going to get an exemption? Go home, Blueblood. We may be related, but I'll personally throw you into the dungeon if you cause any trouble!" He let go of Blueblood, who stumbled, and fell on his rear before running off.
"That's not the last we'll hear from him," Bright Shield said. While the rest of the guards went back to their assigned posts, the two captains walked back to the barracks. The legionnaires from earlier had asked for a few strange things: the location of the Coldhorn the Watcher wing, which was really just a small, obscure room deep within the library, the location of Skymirror Lake, which was in the middle of changeling territory, and the location of Everfree Castle. They refused to explain why save for mentioning that it involved Black Rose.
Shining Armor pulled out the sheaf of papers that the legionnaires provided him with as he walked on.
Blue Moon - unicorn mage and leader of the Thorns. Specializes in Abjuration magic. Known best for his part in the Battle for Sharpstone Bridge where he held off an ursan army by himself for two days. Currently under custody.
Lion Court - unicorn mage. Served as a diplomat and spy. Credited with two hundred kills from formal duels. Specializes in Enchanting, and uses the extremely rare skill of mage-blade wielding.
Longstride - pegasus sniper. Armed with a magical bow with line-of-sight range.
Sablesteel - pegasus infiltrator. Uses a variety of poisons, and extremely dangerous in close range.
Rhapsody - earth pony bard. Plays "Warsinger" a dangerous magical instrument that tears into the enemy's nerves. Believed to be still dead. Black Rose is looking for a replacement.
Frenzy Heart -earth pony berserker. Wields a giant stone blade, a True Earth Pony heirloom, with ease. Also believed to be still dead.
Equestria's enemies appeared daunting from just reading the information about them. He had to steel himself for facing them for real. He read the descriptions, but they weren't what made him worry.
"That was some standing up you did for Princess Celestia," Bright Shield said. "You're really all in for this Legion huh? What did they do to impress you?"
"Nothing," Shining Armor replied. "All I know is that Twiley believed in these ponies enough to be banished for them. That's good enough for me."
They turned one corner, and passed by a group of ponies arguing among themselves about the earlier address.
"Legion aside, you never told me how your honeymoon went," Bright Shield said.
Shining Armor grinned. "You're right, I never did."
After a moment of silence, Bright Shield grinned as well. "Oh, that's how it is, eh?"
Shining Armor snorted. "Maybe if you finally marry Sky Piercer, we can swap stories."
"As if that's going to happen." Bright Shield let out a sigh. "That mare's going to tease me forever!"
Shining Armor chuckled. They walked on silence for a while until Bright Shield spoke again.
"You know, at the risk of sounding bloodthirsty, part of me's actually glad about all these recent revelations."
Shining Armor's smile lessened. "Why's that?"
Bright Shield shrugged. "It's just a little comforting to know that there's more to this job than guarding tea parties, or dealing with the rare attack that will be resolved without our help anyway."
"Be careful what you wish for, Bright Shield," Shining Armor said, his tone darkening.
"I don't have to wish for it. It's happening anyway."
The two of them stopped in front of the barracks. "Well, Bright Shield," Shining Armor said. "The Guard's chance to really shine has just come."
You know, I will never understand how this story only has 106 likes as it is easily one of the top 10 greatest pony-fics of all time.
I fully agree with Mortis !
yay keep it up buy a whip if you need motivation
liking this chapter.
Oh boy...
so not only Shining armor is this story's canon, but also the wedding, Cadence and the changelings. Ont only that but the changelings actually have a territory in the heartland.
I'm not sure how you will make it all work. Take into consideration that this might not be the last time we see changelings in MLP and your decision to include them might bite you in the backside if the creators of the show take them into completely different direction. I'm not complaining, I just wonder how will you make it all work.
Can we have Blueblood being smacked around some more please? Better yet, make that rarity who does the smacking around. Make him her subordinate or something. That would be awesome :D
unless of course you have a big plans for rebellion lead by Blueblood, that might be interesting as well. And make a good explanation how is he Celestia's nephew.
Also, the thorns. Now we know that Black Rose is missing a bard earth pony - Octavia's chances just got up a lot, and an earth pony warrior (if Blademane wasn't a pile of ash it would be a great spot for him).
And of course the squad:
Blue Moon is missing as well, a powerful unicorn mage... - would be Twilight's counterpart
Lion Court - mage-blade wielding - Rarity's counterpart
Longstride - pegasus sniper - Rainbow Dash's counterpart
Sablesteel - pegasus infiltrator - Fluttershy's counterpart
Rhapsody - earth pony bard – would be Pinkie Pie's counterpart
Frenzy Heart -earth pony berserker – would be Applejack's counterpart
this might be interesting, especially since the Elements are mere recruits and the Thorns are extremely experienced in combat.
What else, Shinking Armor is pissed at Celestia, understandable and I like it.
Will we see Chrysalis? Will she play any major part in here?
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As far as I have understoond didn't blue moon surrender himself and isn't he currently in a dungeon somewhere?
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The reason it has so little views/likes is because this story is also posted on fanfiction and I believe equestria daily links to that site instead of this one.
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indeed he surrender so this spot is currently free. although we do not now how serious he was about surrendering and betraying Black Rose.
In any case, this spot is vacant for now and BR may want to look for someone to replace him. Again, great place for Pyre, but she’s in no shape to do it, being dead and buried, also cremated.
I love this rendition of Shining Armor, he is awesome.
It would be hilarious if Cadence was the secret love child of Terrato and Black Rose that I have wondered about in the past.
Nice gesture by Terrato to not make the draft permanent.
I was actually thinking about this story a little while before I saw that it had updated. Of course Blueblood would start causing a ruckus... I really hope they can get him to settle down before he and the other nobles are sent to the Barrier Lands. Wouldn't want them to confirm any Chosen stereotypes.
516689 While I'm not sure about that, I will say that it has to be one of the best dark stories. Probably my favourite one.
Well now that you've made Cadance a part of this story, I'm really curious as to where she stands in your lore. Obviously, she doesn't have control over any celestial corpses like the other alicorns do. Sooo, it'd be nice to have an explanation or something. I'm still rooting for the "winged unicorn" story, bred from an alicorn and a mortal pony (probably Terrato).
To be honest I think you made this kinda complicated on yourself for no reason. Could've ignored that part of canon and most people wouldn't hold you against it, seeing as you started writing this story way before it was ever revealed.
STILL! I love this story. Keep doing what you do best! À la prochaine
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I'm not that worried about Cadence, since she can be easily explained by removing her wings or just adding winged unicorns to the lore. What I am a little worried is the presence of changelings and Chrysalis. She defeated Celestia - that needs explanation, as well as the reason why something as powerful and dangerous was inside the barrier (unless it has something to do with the blasphemous rift which was kinda hinted I think). It also mean that the power of love is a thing as well, Terrato will laugh his rear end off when he learns about that :p
the other thins is Twilight and her friends defeating half of changeling army on their way to get the elements and then suddenly forgetting about their fighting skills in barrier lands. I mean, Twilight had pretty decent magical blasts and she stomped a changeling to the ground, but the best she could do in barrier lands in TK a wolven to the ground and only after she remembered Pyre suggesting it earlier. Sure, her magic was weakened, but it's not that she really is that inexperienced in combat situation. A little bit of inconsistency but it does leave a a mark on otherwise stainless plot. Also, Visdane has to fix the text when Twilight meets Luna for the first time again.
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I guess. Cadance (is it written with an a or an e?!) can be explained and it has to be. Canon makes her an alicorn, while this story shouldn't, so yeah.
I guess the difference is that Changelings weren't looking to kill anypony. They were trying to, err, force submission into them. Personally, if a rampaging monster was running at me with the intent to tear me apart, limb by limb, to finally eat me, I'd be scared shitless. That wouldn't be the case for some dudes simply trying to subdue me for whatever reason.
I even made that point in another thread before; I doubt Twilight was even able to blast the changelings like she did. Nothing in the show ever points her to being able to use "aggressive" magic. She's seen to have trouble transforming a rock into a tophat, be rendered breathless from casting a pair of wings, and yet here she was blasting off spells like a gattling gun, quite literally. I have a bit of trouble accepting the final of season 2 as canon for that reason, amongst others. I really liked it, for entertainment value, but I still think it didn't fit into the general storyline. Not to mention RD pulling off a Sonic Rainboom like it was nothing, going against the pull of the Earth. (Race against Scarlet, anyone?)
But yeah, like you said, it's barely a stain on this story's plot. I'm not gonna rage about it. I'm simply pointing out that ignoring the finals canon might be the way to go.
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Well, Twilight was getting better and better with her magic skills. I think simple magic bursts don't require the level of concentration that a transmutation spell does. But of course, everything in the show has to be scaled down to fit the setting of this story. After all, if Twiligh could take an anvil to the head in the show than why 18 lashes rendered her unconsciousness and in need of Luna's healing magic. Not to mention all crushes RD suffered and stuff like that. I just hope we will bet a good backstory on the events surrounding the changeling invasion.
And you have a good point with changelings not being murderous monsters but it still requires some explanation.
I think we will get some backstory once Twilight gets to Canterlot.
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"The Bosun prides himself on cleaving flesh from bone...with every swing!"
But yeah. Cartoons being cartoons.
Backstory, backstory, backstory, yaaaay!~~~
awesome chapter as always! i dont think i have ever read a bad chapter from you...
love seeing blueblood being pushed around, also love seeing terrato compromise and actually stop being a total jerk all the freaking time.
i think it's quite good that you introduced Shining Armor in the story, my only worry about that is how you explain cadence; i mean the part about her being a winged-unicorn/alicorn (i dont really care if you make her out to be a alicorn or not, i just hope that you dont 'give' her immortality and demi-god levels of magic/strength like celestia (with powers intact), luna, terrato and other immortals introduced)
I think you're all being a bit cruel to Blueblood - he may be a bit of a tosser, but he still stood up for what he believed in whilst facing some of the most powerful ponies in Equestria, which is more difficult than it sounds.
I dare one of you lot to go up to someone who could easily kill you and tell them they're wrong.
And then Lyra and Big Mac oin Black Rose.
521848 Visiden has said over on the EQD page, that the tech level will be whatever it needs to be for the story just like in the show, for example: if there needs to be a phonograph, it will be present, if there needs to be train, it will be there (Visiden's comment: link (not sure if the link will work))
528413 remember that Rhapsody was an EARTH pony bard, and last time I checked, Lyra was a unicorn, so unless BR (Black Rose) doesn't care about earth pony to unicorn to pegasi ratio, I'm putting my bits on Octavia joining the Thorns
plus I highly doubt Big Mac could be convinced to join Black Rose and fight against his sister, even though her powers of manipulation are extremely good, though that would lead to some awesome fight scenes
of course Visiden could bring in equally awesome OC's to fill those positions, because canon characters wouldn't work, guess we'll just have to wait and see
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Or Twilight might simply have gotten better at magic? That was in early Season 1 whilst in Season 2 she was performing powerful spells with ease throughout (Anti-chaos counterspell, rapid and frequent teleportations, Freakin' TIME TRAVEL). Twilight being good or getting better at magic is an awfully silly thing to complain about, no offence intended.
517060 That's called "diplomacy." In order to avoid civil war within the Heartland, Terrato needed to make concessions. And eliminating the lifetime requirement from ponies that are drafted will be, as he says, a way to pitch it as "service to country," rather than a sentence. Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori, and all that.
I think Cadence being Celestia's niece via Terrato would be nice, but logistically almost impossible. Unless Terrato sent her to the Heartland to keep her away from King Fenrir.
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I'm joining.
I don't know about you other ponies but I want to protect Equestria.
If only Fancy Pants was still alive... He's such a good guy, Terrato would finally understand that not all upper class ponies are stuck up. Some, like Fancy Pants, are are just such good guys! It's rediculous!
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Who cares about that Faggy Armor, where's Roid Rage? In these times of peril we need his inspiring battle roar and physical awesomeness.
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Damn, Nightcanter is such a sexaholic slut!
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597364 dude... his name is snowflake...
After reading this, Blueblood would defiantly be the $300 man from Gangs of New York Draft Riots
I get the feeling that, if given the choice, the Mane Six would choose to stay in the Legion.
Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Twilight have all found themselves to be warriors at heart. They have fought, bled, and watch their Brothers and Sisters-in-Arms die for Equestria. For them, the Legion is is quickly becoming their homes, if it has not already done so.
Aj and RD, in particular, would be strongly inclined to stay, both having strong senses of duty to Equestria; RD with her sense of loyalty, which makes oaths for her lifelong ones, and AJ with her sense of honesty, which means that she knew it was a lifelong commitment, and was fully prepared and accepting of that when she joined.
With Twilight, it is her sense of Duty to Equestria, and to Celestia, along with Luna and Terrato by association, which compels her to stay in the Legion.She has found her purpose, and feels it is her obligation and responsibility, to always serve and remain faithful to ALL of Equestria.
With Fluttershy, I see her staying with the medical corps, knowing that she will always wish to help those who are hurting. Pinkie I see staying, because I feel she would sense that the warriors in the Legion will be in need of her ability to bring cheer to her fellow ponies, even during the darkest of times. And Rarity has found something more than just making fancy dresses. She has found a calling to make sure that the Legion has the best equipment that she can offer. It is her way of giving of herself, that she helps the Legion with its needs.
Wait...wait one second. Changeling queen? If Chrysalis is here, then that means she fooled Shining, and if this entire plot from canon was there....
Where the bloody hell has Cadence been? More than a bit bizarre that another alicorn got no mention in the entirety of the first story. Well, unless that was written during the first season and she hadn't even shown up in canon yet...yeah, that sounds right.
Still, very odd she wasn't even referenced in the first one. Going to be interesting to see how you explain that.
If the guard has any sense theyd ask for some additional training from combat veterans before deploying