After a traumatic experience with an animals life Fluttershy could have saved, the shy yellow mare tries to repress her memories in her nursery turned sanctuary. However this sanctuary turns nightmare as one of the filly mare friends interrupt her.
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A few grammar errors but other than that, nice story so far
I think Fluttershy got a diaper rash.
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Chapter is nice but please quote some dialog's! it's annoying to read non-quoted dialog's.
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You're not the only one. >_<
Rarity?
There is so many problems with this story so far but I don't think it's unsalvageable. There is certainly some good in there. I think a good proof reading and a few revisions could fix up most of it.
ugh none of this makes sense anymore.....