After a traumatic experience with an animals life Fluttershy could have saved, the shy yellow mare tries to repress her memories in her nursery turned sanctuary. However this sanctuary turns nightmare as one of the filly mare friends interrupt her.
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Sounds like THAT feeling went to twilight........
Uh shouldn't Twilight have checked Fluttershy's diaper when she woke up? I mean Fluttershy is still incontinent right? It's not like she just magically recovered right?
And as for Twilight trying to soil herself on the spot? Um no offense but I'm not really sure if she should be doing something like that, even if it's to make Fluttershy feel better. Considering it might be fine, but actually wanting to do it? That's just a little odd for somepony who's only now getting into the world of adult foals.
As for that academy flash back? There should be no excuse for that kind of behavior or treatment. A former military pony being put in charge of a flight academy in general should be a big no. And there is no way that stallion can claim he has the cadets best intrests at heart. But what's even worse is that only Fluttershy and the nurse have the nerve to call him out on what he's doing. Everypony else should be all over that stallion for allowing such a thing, not laughing at the one pony who has the guts to say "What the hell is wrong with you?!"
I'm not going to dislike this or stop following it but I really feel like this chapter was just a sudden snap of emotions.
3441238>>3441238 So I'm actually glad you asked these questions, allow me to weigh in
-Just because Fluttershy is incontinent now doesn't mean she always going to wet herself, that and the fact that since she went to the hospital she's had nothing to drink.
- Twilight's attempt at 'messing' herself is supposed to show you guys the gradual semblance of what seeing Fluttershy's fetish and how bizarre to her it still really is. Keep in mind Twilight has always been a "INTP" on the Myer Brigg's personality scale which suggest that something as unexplained like her Foal get up hyped her curiosity.(Remember "Feeling Pinkie Keen"?)
- As Twilight looked at herself in the mirror she starts to examine every aspect she's feeling because of her outfit, and being alone she finally gets a chance to weigh in on what she said earlier to Fluttershy about it making her feel "Secure".
- Twilight started to feel emotionally charged by this uncertainty, the very bain of what makes her a great unicorn and scholar. In her frustration she starts acting instinctively upon what her body feels is the most natural response. She submits and starts a desperate attempt to fall into a Foalish mindset as she starts contracting her muscles.
- Finally when she weigh's in on the fact that she wanted to mess herself rather than find the logical explanation like she'd usually attempt, she see's herself becoming a little less reason based and starts to think of herself as more of a foal. This in all I tried to leave vague by her flustered expression on her face, something that only happens after either; mental exhaustion, physical strain, and or emotional strain.
- This is how I interpreted it, honestly you may think of what you want of it. After all the reason could be justified in many aspects, trust me more reason will come about in future chapters.
- The Flight Academy was a harsh depiction of Fluttershy's sub-conscience that she conjured up in her mind. Much like when you were a kid you'd look up to an adult that was a monster in size comparison, it's all her perspective investing itself unto what really happened
- Anyhow, I apperciate you pointing this all out it's nice to explain my writing every once in a while! I know this chapter seemed a bit like an emotional snap, but I do have a method to my madness
- Anyhow have a nice day man ~ Dj_England
3440826 Haha, no comment!
3443984 Well she still did have an accident before bed, implying that she's bowel incontinent. So at the very least I think Twilight should've still checked Fluttershy's diaper, just in case.
3444681 I don't think Fluttershy had an accident the night prior Trust me though, something like you mentioned is going to play it's part in the next chapter just be patient!
3444929 Well how do we know if Twilight didn't check?
3445192 ... Just be patient, I assure I will focus more on the topic in the next chapter!
3445255 And when can we expect that? Also will any of the mane six outside of Twilight find out about what's been happening in Fluttershy's life?
You should correct pagesus to Pegasus!