After a traumatic experience with an animals life Fluttershy could have saved, the shy yellow mare tries to repress her memories in her nursery turned sanctuary. However this sanctuary turns nightmare as one of the filly mare friends interrupt her.
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You seem to be getting better but Fluttershy just suddenly started feeling insecure again.
3177934 My only comment over that is that she hates bringing up the topic of her fetish (If you call it that). It's quite hard to explain, but if you've ever brought up something sensitive to someone (Especially to an introverted personality like Fluttershy) they tend to get defensive and or start feeling insecure. With a personality like Fluttershy (Which I've determined is ISFP) they usually judge themselves harshly and tend to openly accept criticism especially from those they love. If you don't know what ISFP is it's one of 16 results from the "Myer Briggs Personality Test)
3181380 It just seems odd to see her relapse, especially considering Twilight already told her she took care of her for 3 days.
3195631 Wow, thanks for pointing this out I'm rather busy right now, I'm about a month into my education and I'm getting more into rhythm of writing. I spend about 15-45 minutes working on these when I get a chance. I've been trying to sit down and write these in one or two sittings at a time but it's strenuous to do so and keep continuity in the meanwhile. I'd appreciate if someone would help me proof edit, If not I'm thinking about just re-writing a few of the chapters.