After a traumatic experience with an animals life Fluttershy could have saved, the shy yellow mare tries to repress her memories in her nursery turned sanctuary. However this sanctuary turns nightmare as one of the filly mare friends interrupt her.
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You're missing a lot of quotation marks in some parts, but other than that, the concept is really good so far
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Why thank you , within the next two weeks I'm going to revise the whole story. Try to edit any grammar mistakes really. The next chapter will be out most likley between this Friday-Sunday
Again kind of jarring and rushed. I feel like you're just not putting 100% into this. I still like it and will follow it for now but you still haven't earned that upvote.
Good chapter. More please?
3216871 Heads up the next chapter comes out tomorrow
This story is really good. . Good luck on the next chapter. I'm going to encourage you to make more chapters. I've never read a story as good as this one. Am I smothering you too much?
3263634 Awh, why thank you! I assure you I will continue to make the story, I just was rather preoccupied with some school work and last week was my schools "Fall Formal"
twilight must've gotten mommy fever