After a traumatic experience with an animals life Fluttershy could have saved, the shy yellow mare tries to repress her memories in her nursery turned sanctuary. However this sanctuary turns nightmare as one of the filly mare friends interrupt her.
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Not bad but this is obviously channeling ARBPW's "Mother's Don't Need Manuals" and that in and of itself kind of spells trouble. Your idea is good but it's already been done and clearly done better. And F.I.Y Applejack's dog is Winona not Fiona.
And if you think I'm being harsh then I would not recommend letting Darkentrophy see this because he'll rip it apart.
This idea could be better and hopefully it will improve.
3012650 Wow, thanks for pointing AJ's dog name out It was an honest mistake but thank goodness I can correct this.
As far as the conflict goes I don't most will suspect the route I will be trying to take with this story. Quite frankly (Not to spoil much) But I'm trying to offer a more realistic reaction of the other ponies to this life style Fluttershy has taken. I've been making the story as I go along but I think in the end I can deliver on my promise of this being more on the physiological side of infantilism then the fetish portion.
Also I really enjoyed "Mothers Don't Need Manuals" It's one of my favorite fics on this site, however in my opinion "Pattycakes The Remake" Is the most well written story in my opinion
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Baby Cakes? Don't you mean Pattycakes: The Remake? Either way, thanks for that.
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Silly me Yes I meant "Pattycakes". It was the best written story on the website (In my opinion) and it deserves the praise
cover image? i see none.....
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I've been having a technical issue that I hope to get resolved :)
3012650 Hey! "Don't let DarkEntrophy see this." is my line!
3014072 Sorry I didn't know.
3014087 That's okay. It was a joke.
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> It was the best written story on the website
Now that's just full of shit, and I'm not talking about the diaper.
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3014090 Gotta say now i"m a little bit concerned that "DarkEntrophy" is going to see it
3016899 See above...
Aside from some issues in grammar and some words that don't need capitalization, this is a good and interesting story so far. I haven't read "Mothers Don't Need Manuals," but it sounds interesting. One other thing: I wouldn't suggest you just make this up as you go along. In my experience, this tends to lead to writer's block. I find that sitting down and actually planning the story, point by point, helps with the writing process and doesn't make some things look like you completely pulled it out of your ass.
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Thanks for the advice, there isn't much I can do about grammar as my fondness of reading and writing has really just started. However I assure you I'm working on it. Also the first chapter was the only one that I thought as I went along, I now know the direction I'm going in and I'm planing on releasing the newest chapter soon
All I have to say is go to youtube and watch this video
/watch?v=NGg_7OhyGCM
Fluttershy has fingers?
3015506 Calm the buck down dude! Every(pony) has their own opinion! If Oliver thinks Pattycakes: The remake is the best written story on this site, he can think that. not to give him any extra power or something, but he is the owner of this group. Sorry if I was harsh. I don't like being mean. Just think before you post. Sorry if I was mean, again.
I feel bad for applejack, applebloom and big Macintosh