After a traumatic experience with an animals life Fluttershy could have saved, the shy yellow mare tries to repress her memories in her nursery turned sanctuary. However this sanctuary turns nightmare as one of the filly mare friends interrupt her.
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Well things were going okay up until Twilight's sudden feeling of uselessness. And that that last part, I do hope you don't intend to make the two any more intimate onscreen.
And shouldn't Rarity be concerned that she supposedly got glass stuck in her rump? Also for the record since when would Fluttershy feel comfortable letting Rainbow Dash or Pinkie Pie know about her more "personal issues"? Speaking of person I fail to see how Rarity knows what people are.
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- Intimacy means any sort of intense and or personal moment between two or more people (or ponies). The reason the two are being affectionate to each other after all isn't on parallel grounds with each other.
- Afterall Fluttershy see's Twilight as the mother figure she never had and is having trouble expressing herself, the sailor outfit and diaper however is what makes her attracted to Twilight.
- Twilight however is only attracted to Fluttershy because she's the only one she's learned to trust on an intimate level, and is subconsciously using Fluttershy as a way to vent her feelings.
- Yes, she recognizes she is an important part of the kingdom, and she plays an important part in the EOH. However something that tends to happen to famous people is they feel isolated from others as most only know about their accomplishments rather then their actual feelings and opinions.
- Not to mention that honestly Twilight Sparkle is still living in the shadow of the princess (As of Season 3)
- Last note on Fluttershy and Twilight is a big part of what causes Fluttershy's trauma after all is the lack of empathy she got as a filly. Trust me, there was a reason Twilight and Fluttershy's love seemed well done but awkwardly timed. They're both desperate for affection.
- Oh, and Rarity just sat on top of the glass bottle, it didn't break
Also thank you for the video, that actually made me laugh a bit!
The grammar errors get to me too much , but other than that, this story is getting good, I don't mean the clop, I mean the story itself.
3467905 I don't quite think that was clop. Though I can see why you might think it was.
Um..., is this going to turn into a sex clop????
3471895 I hope not. I don't see a Romance or Sex tag so hopefully that's a good sign.
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Yes; hot mare on mare action... just kidding.
Not to give away to many plot points but something decently relevant to your guys' response to the whole random bit of affection element I threw into chapter 15 does play out later in the story, just not quite the way you'd think
3475043 Okay I guess?
Also Fluttershy mentioned only bladder incontience yet a few chapters ago seemed to imply she had both. Or was that just Twilight assuming things?
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Oh, that's partially my own mistake! Fluttershy has both types of incontinence. I for some reason assumed bladder and bowel incontinence were the same this, my bad!