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Its pretty good. There is a few errors here and there, but besides that goes read. Will definitely be watching this one.

Is this a Black Ops 2 cross? Or is it just me?

-The Good Doctor

2993934 Thanks, that means a lot and yea I've been trying to work some things out in the first chapter which should be out either this week or next

2994107 No it wasn't supposed to be but their may be some similarities here and there but I'm trying to keep it original

I like this idea i will read it later.:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

3004713 Thanks man, means a lot to me to know that people are reading. If you see anything wrong, or thing of something i could do different, or idea for the next chapter go ahead and say so i accept all feedback

Twilight is vary out of character like wow just wow.:derpyderp1::derpyderp2:
im looking foreword to the fighting and killing of griffins but at least have the characters be in character dialog can change as much as you want.:pinkiecrazy::rainbowhuh::ajbemused:.

looking foreword to the war.

Spike better not die, that seem to happen most of the time in war fics.

Still like it can't wait for the war,hope it will be bloody.:pinkiecrazy:

3276354You bet your ass itll be :pinkiecrazy:HAHAHAHA

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short really short but good

4767430 they'll get longer when I can think of more dialogue. But for now this is all I'm inspired to do so far.

What happened to the AA guns? :facehoof: And there are unicorns, they couldn't put up a shield around the castle?

2996458 I can base a lot more for the future if it happens like this, and thanks for the fav bruh!!!

Bravo excellent work.

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