2791537 Your avatar is the one I use on youtube Great minds think alike 2793423 I looked through a lot of ads for them actually, when I was doing some research on how they're built I guess you've googled it by now, they're pretty reasonable, I thought.
2791962 Yay! You've been around since last year, I'm glad you're still here and enjoying my writing 2791300 Oh snap. I wasn't even gonna touch on that, it didn't come to mind.
2791111 I share this sentiment The way I write, (it's kind of weird) I start from the middle or end, write out something I want to happen, then flesh out the story as I go. Sometimes I'll have like 3 bits right in the middle that I just gotta fill in the blanks between, but this story just started with that first scene, and working up to it I'm just like... sorry Octavia and Vinyl, I didn't mean it
2793676 I know what you mean about how you write stories. It's how I write sometimes as well, I know what I want to happen at the end and how it starts (sometimes) and flesh out the in between parts. Sometimes it works pretty well.
However, this is the first I've seen a story written like this on this site (where they have an end part at the start and work your way up to it). It's a very good read, please don't stop! (for any of your stories actually, they're all really good!)
2800818 Glad you like it! I'm going to finish this one before I pick up the others, I've decided, but thanks to my writing in patches, it's actually close to being finished... just gotta touch up certain parts and fill in some gaps. And nice to see someone else who uses that writing style, I don't know of anyone else who does
2802290 Not planning on having him show up again... I like him too though. He was gonna be just a nameless guy, but since MLP characters often have names relating to their destinies, decided it'd be funny to name him Ganja... hehe.
I very much enjoy the way both Octavia and Vinyl are portrayed in this story. the beginning got my attention, and the story has refused to let go. A lot of times, when I put a fic on my to read list after reading the first chapter, it'll sit unread for weeks, months- well, you get the picture. I read the first chapter this morning, went to go do something, then I absolutely HAD to finish. That rarely happens. In fact, most of the characters you have used were very engaging. Octavia's parents, Vinyl's.... Grandpa? i didn't quite catch that one. The quartet member that did get lines made me LOLz.
On teh grammarz - your writing is pretty much flawless. I spotted no errors- though if there were any, I was probably too engrossed to notice them.
In conclusion, this is a gem among fanfictions, and this should be on the featured box from now until eternity.
And thus I rate this story a five out of five stars.
Simply, beautiful.
Very nice and gentle.
A update?
"Up to Scratch" you say?
*Reads*
2790526 List of things that make a good fan fic:
1. Sex.
2.
This has all my yes
Oh god, the fight they're going to have seems even more terrible by every chapter!
Stupid of me to ask, but there will be chapters after their fight right? :3, Fantastic writing, +1
...Well...
That's one way to get laid I suppose?
Aaand I'm waiting for Tavi's parents to find out that their daughter is gay. That's going to be hilarious.
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2791537 Your avatar is the one I use on youtube Great minds think alike
2793423 I looked through a lot of ads for them actually, when I was doing some research on how they're built I guess you've googled it by now, they're pretty reasonable, I thought.
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2791962 Yay! You've been around since last year, I'm glad you're still here and enjoying my writing
2791300 Oh snap. I wasn't even gonna touch on that, it didn't come to mind.
2791111 I share this sentiment The way I write, (it's kind of weird) I start from the middle or end, write out something I want to happen, then flesh out the story as I go. Sometimes I'll have like 3 bits right in the middle that I just gotta fill in the blanks between, but this story just started with that first scene, and working up to it I'm just like... sorry Octavia and Vinyl, I didn't mean it
Hands down my favorite fan fic. ever.
2793730 Thank you! And it's not even done yet i.imgur.com/FRK8qfD.gif
This is just as good as Accidental Harmony. Which was my favorite fic ever.
2793676 We'll forgive you as long as there are chapters after it in which they forgive each other
2793676 I know what you mean about how you write stories. It's how I write sometimes as well, I know what I want to happen at the end and how it starts (sometimes) and flesh out the in between parts. Sometimes it works pretty well.
However, this is the first I've seen a story written like this on this site (where they have an end part at the start and work your way up to it). It's a very good read, please don't stop! (for any of your stories actually, they're all really good!)
And so it begins.
LOL, the first two comments are perfect
AMAZING chapter
What can i say...
I Love it!
But it kinda sucks to know that there will be some kind of drama comming up...
(Ps: I love this gunja dude - any chance that he makes another appearance?)
2800818 Glad you like it! I'm going to finish this one before I pick up the others, I've decided, but thanks to my writing in patches, it's actually close to being finished... just gotta touch up certain parts and fill in some gaps. And nice to see someone else who uses that writing style, I don't know of anyone else who does
2802251 Thank you, hope you enjoy the rest
2802290 Not planning on having him show up again... I like him too though. He was gonna be just a nameless guy, but since MLP characters often have names relating to their destinies, decided it'd be funny to name him Ganja... hehe.
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Can't wait!
Dude.
You must make more. I love this.
NOW FOR THE REVIEW!
I very much enjoy the way both Octavia and Vinyl are portrayed in this story. the beginning got my attention, and the story has refused to let go. A lot of times, when I put a fic on my to read list after reading the first chapter, it'll sit unread for weeks, months- well, you get the picture. I read the first chapter this morning, went to go do something, then I absolutely HAD to finish.
That rarely happens.
In fact, most of the characters you have used were very engaging. Octavia's parents, Vinyl's.... Grandpa? i didn't quite catch that one. The quartet member that did get lines made me LOLz.
On teh grammarz - your writing is pretty much flawless. I spotted no errors- though if there were any, I was probably too engrossed to notice them.
In conclusion, this is a gem among fanfictions, and this should be on the featured box from now until eternity.
And thus I rate this story a five out of five stars.
This review was brought to you by Humanized Authors Alliance.
Well, that came outta left field.
Coincidently, that's my favorite field in OctaScratch.