Quite good so far. I like how you tied together the initial scene where Octavia threw back the ring at Vinyl with this. I think what I'm trying to say with that is that I'm glad that you made it a ring she got as a friend, and not an engagement ring or something.
Quite good so far. I like how you tied together the initial scene where Octavia threw back the ring at Vinyl with this. I think what I'm trying to say with that is that I'm glad that you made it a ring she got as a friend, and not an engagement ring or something.
Hmmmm. The bit about respecting the dead (Especially parents) struck a chord with me...
Also, Bowtie.. I like that nickname.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Liking this so far.