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Published 12th Feb 2012
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Equestian Warfare - AppleGothic

After the Gryphons go into Civil War, Dash insists into Luna's Tactics Unit (CoD 4 Crossover)

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Bloodpool

Bloodpool #1 · Feb 12th, 2012 · · ·

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First chapter looks good, although the verbal exchanges between soldiers and their commanding officers seem a little informal. Officers have to demand respect, othewise they don't last long.

-Mortem aut gloria. Eligere sapienter.

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