I knew that the story would be popular here. By the way, don't get discourage by dislikes. Especially when there is no comment that say why. It usually means that the voter just doesn't like the genre.
2587089 Very true. I think it would be good to post a chapter a day, or every other day. You know, build up the suspense for those that don't go to fanfiction. Plus this way this way by the time you are caught up here the beginning of your new story could be ready. In the end it is your choice. Take all of the time that you need then. You are very welcome.
2587360 The fact that he had no parents ect is explained later on. But I agree it is pretty cliche, but then again when you know something that works, you use it :)
2587368 I agree with you on that, but please don't make him one of those humans that say his own species is a monster and he the only good guy on Earth.
2587640 You DO NOT have to worry about that my friend...Celestia isn't exactly an angel in this story.
And that's as much as I'm going to spoil
But no. He will not be all like "I am the only nice Human in the world and everybody else is horrible and treats everyone like shit!"
It'll be more like "Yeah some people are bad and some are good. I'm not perfect myself but I don't judge my whole race on a few personal bad experiences."
Really enjoying the story so far; im always drawn to these types of fics. I must say ,however, does anyone find the punishment of turning someone into a pony against their will (if that is the case) rather abhorent and evil? Regardless of how bad that person was to begin with. Anyway, man, keep up the good work. Cheers.
I'd say he got off lightly. Being left to rot in a true dungeon, not one of our modern posh prison cells, is worse. At least he's got his freedom... I think? Then again, who knows how many statues in the Royal Gardens were hoof-crafted and not just "examples".
Wow, this story has a LOT of potential, love it so far! Your writing style is vivid but not cluttered. This is already one of my all time favorites, just because of how excellent it is, plot, writing, and all. Keep going!
I like that his reaction to anything is runaway! Correction, look for open window and then jump out of said window because jumping out of windows the only exit strategy that Chris knows...you get a feeling that he's not all that smart and has the self-preservation skills of a lemming. You get a feeling that even if there was a door that said "easy exit and free puppies" the protagonist would still rather find a way out that involves glass, fire or a tank with leeches and sharks.
It's a bit too TCB'y for my tastes. Plus now there's always the chance that the social charms she laid on him will wear off and he'll be back to his old self.
I kind of wander what is that mark on Chris head? Did that mark represent his soul begin to restore and will fade once he is back to normal? Or did its something else that you will explain latter? Also, treat him, like Celestia and Luna, and declare him,her lover? Wow Celestia really just want to announce her love to the fort wings, I think she just proclaim him prince. This will be interesting, and I glad that Chris, fell something for Celestia but it will be something gradual. Good move, a lot of authors jump right into the romance.
P.S: Change Dan personality? If she can do that why she hasn't done that to Blueblood? then again, Dan was a murder, and try to kill the love of her live twice without any remorse, yeah, I bet he was 2 words, to be expel into the sun
This story is simply brilliant! I used to be indifferent in regards to fic's involving Tia, but this one just shines a whole new beautiful perspective on her being I thank you on behalf of everyone reading this for making such an amazing story, and I can't wait for more chapters
2586805 Not long, the third chapter is up and the rest will be uploaded sooner or later.
I knew that the story would be popular here.
By the way, don't get discourage by dislikes. Especially when there is no comment that say why. It usually means that the voter just doesn't like the genre.
2587073 Meh dislikes don't bother me, I've had plenty of flames on Fanfiction with this story.
On the other hand, I'm wondering whether I should just chuck up all the chapters now or wait until later.
Btw editing chapters takes a little bit :P
Thanks for the comments, favs ect
I had to unfav then fav again so I could get email updates for this awesomeness'
Wooo Spetsnaz pinkie pie out.
2587089
Very true.
I think it would be good to post a chapter a day, or every other day. You know, build up the suspense for those that don't go to fanfiction. Plus this way this way by the time you are caught up here the beginning of your new story could be ready.
In the end it is your choice.
Take all of the time that you need then.
You are very welcome.
another excellent chapter keep up the good work.
Impressive story... That old " born into the earth with no parents" stuff
2587282
There will be sex later my friend, just thought I'd let you know
Chapter 9 to be precise
2587291
Cannot tell if sarcasm
But if not then thanks
If this is a side story where is the original
2587306
Hasn't been done yet. This is one of three leading up to it
Oh the story has that "something" to it all right. I hage to say it doesn't feel cliché like most of HiE stories.
However, it is in a dire need of editing. Plenty of missing commas, repetitions and awkward style here and there.
It doesn't warrant a downvote, as I mainly care for the story itself, not it's form. So it was more of an upvote :) The form could be improved though.
What do you think?
PS Forgive any silly errors, it's 2 am and I'm typing it on a phone
2587360
The fact that he had no parents ect is explained later on. But I agree it is pretty cliche, but then again when you know something that works, you use it :)
2587363
Hmm I've noticed some of what you've said and to be honest it's really just some lazy mistakes that I can never be bothered to correct.
When the time comes, I will see what I can do. :)
that was... I want to see pony Dan
"*sees title*"
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"That about sums up his mentality at the moment."
2587534
Random Trivia!
The Alicorn And Her Prince was going to be the original title
2587539
No, the Main Humans will ALWAYS be Human.
I hate that let's turn the Human into a pony crap XD
2587549
Makes more sense and is a lot less disgusting than a human banging a horse...
2587619
Perhaps, but it's not the way I intend this story to go I'm afraid.
So to be blunt, the Human will be banging the horse
2587368 I agree with you on that, but please don't make him one of those humans that say his own species is a monster and he the only good guy on Earth.
Alright, that did it for me.
I've seen plenty of sarcasm in this story, but when Celestia quoted Dan and called him a "charming individual", that did it.
Favorited. And eagerly waiting for your next update.
2587640
You DO NOT have to worry about that my friend...Celestia isn't exactly an angel in this story.
And that's as much as I'm going to spoil
But no. He will not be all like "I am the only nice Human in the world and everybody else is horrible and treats everyone like shit!"
It'll be more like "Yeah some people are bad and some are good. I'm not perfect myself but I don't judge my whole race on a few personal bad experiences."
2587656
Thanks buddy :)
And yes, Celestia can be a bit of a sarcastic troll sometimes XD
Welp I'm hooked. This is one legendary fic!
2587689
Thanks mate, expect more Chapters within the next Twenty four hours
2587693 you rock mate! Can't wait to see what happens next!
In response to the title:
It's almost easy...
And now I begin reading the story in hopes of it being good. Here we go...
Really enjoying the story so far; im always drawn to these types of fics. I must say ,however, does anyone find the punishment of turning someone into a pony against their will (if that is the case) rather abhorent and evil? Regardless of how bad that person was to begin with.
Anyway, man, keep up the good work.
Cheers.
2587819
I do find it absolutely disgusting!
But....
all of my yes!
2587819
I'd say he got off lightly. Being left to rot in a true dungeon, not one of our modern posh prison cells, is worse. At least he's got his freedom... I think? Then again, who knows how many statues in the Royal Gardens were hoof-crafted and not just "examples".
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2587919
Forgive me for this, but I am colorblind and mistook her real color.
Just think of this as a different universe where some things are different :)
I read your story and must say that it is interesting. Great job, hope to see more soon.
Wow, this story has a LOT of potential, love it so far! Your writing style is vivid but not cluttered. This is already one of my all time favorites, just because of how excellent it is, plot, writing, and all. Keep going!
Dude... you finally posted it here on fimfiction.
I like that his reaction to anything is runaway! Correction, look for open window and then jump out of said window because jumping out of windows the only exit strategy that Chris knows...you get a feeling that he's not all that smart and has the self-preservation skills of a lemming. You get a feeling that even if there was a door that said "easy exit and free puppies" the protagonist would still rather find a way out that involves glass, fire or a tank with leeches and sharks.
The waffler also JalapenoWayne.
waiting for the next soon!
2587819
It's a bit too TCB'y for my tastes. Plus now there's always the chance that the social charms she laid on him will wear off and he'll be back to his old self.
I kind of wander what is that mark on Chris head? Did that mark represent his soul begin to restore and will fade once he is back to normal? Or did its something else that you will explain latter?
Also, treat him, like Celestia and Luna, and declare him,her lover? Wow Celestia really just want to announce her love to the fort wings, I think she just proclaim him prince. This will be interesting, and I glad that Chris, fell something for Celestia but it will be something gradual. Good move, a lot of authors jump right into the romance.
P.S: Change Dan personality? If she can do that why she hasn't done that to Blueblood? then again, Dan was a murder, and try to kill the love of her live twice without any remorse, yeah, I bet he was 2 words, to be expel into the sun
2587089
two or three a week. thatll get the most attention.
This story is simply brilliant! I used to be indifferent in regards to fic's involving Tia, but this one just shines a whole new beautiful perspective on her being I thank you on behalf of everyone reading this for making such an amazing story, and I can't wait for more chapters
I fucking love it! I request moar
shnot bad but why in bloddy hell do have to keep Dan and change him into a pony just kill him or send him to the diamond mines with dogs
I'm a huge fan of Celestia shipping, I just wish that there was more of it. Great story you got going on here Liked and favd!
2588365
Tbc'y?
2588419
You know, you're the first person to finally notice this
All shall be explained in Immortal Lovers...trust me :)
2588629
I'm colorblind my friend and didn't realize at the time when I was writing this.
Just take it as something else that this universe has changed
2588273
He popped out by the Everfree forest instead of Earth...Call it a magical mix-up