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Why won't anybody tell me if all of my stories are bad or most of them are? Why won't anybody tell me how to fix them and get better? Why?

For me, I'd choose both pairs: Brown and Pink, and Gray and Purple. These two pairs fit great together, in my opinion, and two of my first OCs have these two as their respective primary colors.

Do you guys agree with me? Which two or more colors do you think go together? Why or why not?

Now, I know you all might be tired of hearing me say this, but I love Spinel so much! She's my favorite Steven Universe villain and one of my favorite villains and characters of all-time. Her design, her personality, her backstory, her animation, her voice-acting, her character arc... She's easily the most fleshed-out and well-written SU villain out of the roster. And I know I'm not alone on this one.

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I know that I have been pestering and bothering people a lot on this site and I'm sorry for being so annoying by doing that, but I don't do it to be mean and I always apologize afterwards, so why are people still being so mean to me?

They don't like most, if not any, of my stories no matter what I do or make. They can be very harsh when it comes to their criticism and when I try to ask why, they barely, if ever, reply back to answer me.

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Sorry to act so cynical and defeatist, but does anyone really want me to leave Fimfiction permanently? If so, is it because I've been pestering you and others so much? Look, I know that I have been very irritating, dense, and annoying, but I already tried to give some people an apology for the way I've been acting.

If I haven't, then here it is:

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I think I'm going to get rid of Odium now. I know that some people like him, but now I'm starting to see why there are others who don't.

It's not his characterization or his backstory or design, but maybe his role in the story and his passive, instead of active, writing. I could be wrong, but now I know what the other side might be talking about.

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I've decided to rewrite the whole Day of Reckoning story in its entirety. By that, I mean, by given everything, including Odium himself, a complete makeover in order to make it a hundred times better than it was before. But first, I need to know all the problems that the current story and Odium had in order to make sure they're all fixed and improved. Can somebody do that for me through either a list, or more or less a paragraph?

Sorry to ask this again and I'm afraid that it looks like I'm still spamming, but as the title suggests, why is my OC hated so much? Is it because I've advertised him too much to the point of spam? Or is it because of his existence in general? If so, why or why not? Sorry to say this, but the latter feels kinda harsh to me and I've seen at least some people who still like him and/or think that he has a reason to exist. Still, I really want to know why.

Hello, everyone. Good to see you all. After everything that's happened recently, I just got bored and overwhelmed and wanted to do something different that might keep both me and others entertained and relieve this stress if needed.

This is a brand-new blog concept that I like to call: Villain Critique. As the title suggests, I get to type a review of any of mine and/or others' favorite villain(s) and what I personally think of them as a whole.

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Look. I know that I've been asking for too much advice and comments on both Odium and The Day of Reckoning story, but I promise you that this will definitely be the last time I talk about that.

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If you want to see what the new chapter is like, here's a link to the story below.

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Hey there, everyone. Sorry to bother you again, but I'm trying to think of a second song for Odium. One that's very deep and emotional and shows his regret and guilt for his own actions and injustices, and his dream of making thinks right, both for his actions and the actions of others, unlike his first song where he wants to put the Mane Six and friends in their place (Side-note: I still haven't figured out how to write great lyrics for that song either). However, I'm having trouble with the

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Sorry to bother you all, but I need to find some good reason for causing Odium's relapse in the story. The reason for this is because I want his character arc to be more harder and more believable and realistic than the show's usual rushed redemption arcs (No offense).

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As the title suggests, what do you think should happen to Odium in the falling action of the story? After everything he tried to do to the Mane Six and their friends and tearfully realizing how ironically villainous and monstrous he's been acting towards them, what do you think he should do?

1. Odium wants to go to Tartarus for eternity as a self-imposed penance for his actions.

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Which of these two choices for you think should happen to Odium that would start the plot of the Rise of Odium?

1. Odium gets knocked out by Twilight during his first fight against the Mane Six.
2. Odium flees after sparing one of the Mane Six, like Fluttershy, out of mercy and high moral standards, vowing to return for justice.

I'm trying to write a great, catchy, and interesting song for my fan-character named Odium. The title is called "Put Them In Their Place" and I'm trying to write well-written lyrics and think of a genre(s) that fit his personality, history, abilities, etc.

However, I'm having trouble doing that on my own.

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Hey there, everyone. I know I keep doing this a lot and I'm sorry if it's getting annoying, but I've created an OC named Odium and I've got some negative feedback about both him and his story, The Rise of Odium, that I'm working on. The negative feedback is only here in Fimfiction and I need some advice on how to make him a better OC for my story. He doesn't have to be perfect, but he can be very great. Sorry if I'm bragging or

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