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Odium's Relapse (Last Ask For Help, I Promise) · 4:26am Jan 29th, 2021
Look. I know that I've been asking for too much advice and comments on both Odium and The Day of Reckoning story, but I promise you that this will definitely be the last time I talk about that.
The story is still unfinished and I'm having trouble with the final two chapters, especially Chapter 5. What I need help with is coming up with a good reason for Odium's relapse back into his hateful and violent demeanor and self-realization of how evil and irredeemable he's become. Can someone help me with that?
Again, this is most certainly the last time that I ask any of you for help with The Day of Reckoning and/or Odium. After any of you help me, I'll never talk about that again.
Thank you and have a wonderful day.
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Heroic412227 · 180 views
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I think Odium's relapse back into his hateful and violent demeanor and self-realization of how evil and irredeemable he's become should come from how he's afraid that he won't be forgiven.
5443811
Thanks.
5443931
You're welcome! Glad I could help.
5443932
Hey, sorry that I'm being ungrateful, but how do I actually write that idea into the chapter? How would it play out? Again, sorry for being ungrateful, though.
5444181
I think that he is afraid that no one will forgive him for his actions and will hate him even more. It takes Twilight and her friends to show him that it may be hard for others to accept him, but with each small step he takes, he can make a difference. How does that work for you?
5444182
That's a great idea! But how do I start his actual relapse back into the antagonist?
5444187
When the ponies offer him a chance with friendship.
5444189
What do you mean?
5444190
When the ponies offer him friendship, Odium mind is filled with stress of what might happen before he goes into his relapse.
5444194
Oh. Thank you.
5444209
You're welcome! You should read my story A Case of Mystery and Love. Since I like your story, I was thinking that you can read my story and post comments on each chapter of what you like about it.
5444233
Thanks. Can you do the same thing for my story on what you like about it?
5444257
Sure thing!