Alright horsefuckers, these two chapters are where the story started getting longer and now there's about 6 thousand words added to both. First and foremost, with Re: 13: Max has more reasons to like Velvet Breeze and their relationship generally makes more sense. I also gave her some background that was much needed, gave her an actual age, and made the woman less... bland in general, I guess. As for Max and Sunbutt, their reunion is a little less 'Oh shit, um...' and is a bit more 'Yeah, so I

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Redemption isn't really about forgiveness or punishment; it's just about trying to be a better person. The things you destroy remain destroyed, the people you hurt stay hurt, but the only thing that defines someone as irredeemable is unwillingness to change when the chance is offered. Believing that people who have done too much harm cannot be redeemed and have to be met with cruelty alone just trap them in "i have gone too far to turn back" and will bring far more harm than if they were

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Now that we have another redemption of sorts, and "Nightmare Nights" from IDW comics has started its five issue run (fittingly it begins on the month that ends with Halloween and ends on the month of Valentine's Day) it's time for the rankings to be updated a little. Here's the previous version, from the middle of Season 8, like before I'm not counting the reformations/redemptions of any comics exclusive villains and as always this

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There aren't any newcomers this time around, everyone who's on here has already appeared on a previous list. But now we've got some things to consider, mostly show stuff but also a little bit of Equestria Girls and some of the comics. Here's the previous version, from just after Season 8, like before I'm not counting the reformations/redemptions of any comics exclusive villains and as

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Hello Everyone,

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I'll probably have to make another one of these after "School Raze" considering what's likely to happen (I won't spoil it for those who still don't know about the synopsis or about the villain), plus an upcoming IDW comic series in a few months will be using some former antagonists. But for now, with "A Matter of Principals" having finally aired here in the U.S. I think it's worth looking back on all the reformations of the villains and see how they stack up. Besides there's a new one to

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Redemption has certainly become an interesting (and perhaps overused) trope in the show, it's gotten to the point where it seems like it's easier to count the number of villains that aren't reformed in some way, shape, or form. Surprisingly, as much as we give flack for redemption becoming an overused tool, there's actually not that many episodes focused directly on redeeming or reforming villains new and old alike.

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So I got rewrite number seventeen done and I asked myself why it took so long to edit. I put a good amount of time into it before I had to calm down with all the writing, and it didn't take much to realize that it was because I could put 15k into the rewritten chapter and only get 8-10k added to the total word count. Shit kinda just slapped me since I delete and rework a lotta shit, but with 17? 10k added to one chapters is a little excessive and I'm kind of scared of OG: 25 looming in the

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I think I just had a nergasm.

Well, Season 9 has given me a lot to talk about in regards to redemptions/reformations, most of it not very good. But we'll get to all of that when we get to it (and in many cases it won't take long to reach the newcomers or the ones moving down). Here's the previous version, from the middle of Season 9, like before I'm not counting the reformations/redemptions of any comics exclusive

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Disclaimer: Disclaimer: This was written in a similar vein to one of Rebecca Sugar's interview about Steven and Spinel from Steven Universe: The Movie. I may also have gotten things wrong about this, so please let me know if I did and why. You have been warned.

My Fan-Made Interview

Sorry to bother you all, but I need to find some good reason for causing Odium's relapse in the story. The reason for this is because I want his character arc to be more harder and more believable and realistic than the show's usual rushed redemption arcs (No offense).

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I must say, I was not expecting the reaction I got from the story to be so overwhelmingly positive in such a short period of time. So I decided to do something a little different than I normally do.

Would you like to chat with me and potentially contribute to the story? Or just talk and have a good time? Well, I made a discord server for the story!

If you are interested, please, step into the Red Circle. You are more than welcome.

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A villain or antagonist who goes against the heroes but has a sad backstory that makes everything okay and the heroes are going to use talk-no-jitsu to resolve the conflict in a short amount of time until they get redeemed with little to no consequences for their actions.

I just wanted to add some comedy in one of my blogs. If I did something wrong by making this, please let me know.

And yes, I am aware that my proposed fixes might make the seasons a bit short but hey, season 3 was the shortest season of the entire show (only 13 episodes long) so...you know.

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Most consider the Wishmaster series rather bad, though I have to admit that the kills were rather imaginative. I mean, someone comments "Oh, please, you can see right through me," then gets turned into a glass statue complete with a skeleton? Admittedly, it would be taking it a bit literal, yet I had to wonder... what if someone got Displaced as the Wishmaster... but unknown to the Vendor sending that fortunate/unfortunate person along, their body and soul were merged with

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Hey there, everyone. As the title suggests, I'm looking for a redemption story. It can be about an OC or Canon character going through a well-written redemption arc and I need to know how to write one of my own through example. Do you know a story like that from either here or from other areas? Thanks.

Aight, that shit got taken down, so I'll be posting the new chapters into the old story and weeping softly into a Panera bread bowl as I type. In any case, every 3 chapters will get a new blog post letting you know that they've been posted. Sorting through Chapter 3 Now, so look for the new chapter names and the (Re:) on the chapters

Hi everyone. I want to thank you all so much for all the love you've shown for my new story. I have a few ideas for others I hope to work on down the line, as well as a couple of one-shots I'm working on now, and I hope you enjoy those too.

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Alrighty, so I've fixed all the links in my bio. The Ringtail Chat has been rebranded and repurposed to Ringo's Writing Chat. Drop by and check out other people's shit. Post your own artistic media. Maybe swing by for a sprint and see how fast you can pump out some words?

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