Bella wakes up and is, for some reason, annoyed with herself for having that dream about the immortal child, as if she could control what she dreams. After breakfast, she and Charlie get ready, and Alice arrives to help them put the finishing touches on their clothes and make them look presentable. There’s an interesting bit where Alice mentions that, to keep the tradition of the groom not seeing the bride’s dress before the wedding, she’s been very careful to not think about the dress when

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These four books are at the very top of my Things-I-Never-Want-to-Read-Again List.

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Most of this chapter is a sort of montage/summary of the first three months of Bella’s vampirization. It’s perfect, of course. She claims to take mythology a lot more seriously, which could be interesting, but it’s only so she can make a too-long metaphor about the Fates’ loom and the color of the threads of herself, her family, and her friends. Nessie keeps growing quickly and she’s adorable without having any character. Alice and Rosalie make a scrapbook of her growth to create the

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The reception begins as Bella looks over all the people who’ve come. A lot of it is listing off names of the obligatory guests — friends and family who don’t play much of a role in the rest of the series. In spite of being a werewolf, Seth is genuinely enthusiastic that Bella and Edward got married. They go through the cake-cutting, the pictures, the dancing, everything. (I’m kind of curious who’s the poor schmuck who got stuck serving the beer and wine. When my brother got married, I, being an

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Hey guys, I know what you're thinking... "three chapters in and he's already falling behind? Uh oh! BURN THE WITCH!" but I do have a valid reason. My mother has been in the hospital, and now she's receiving dialysis and since I'm her caregiver, this puts me square in the middle of everything, and my plate has been beyond overloaded, so I haven't had the time to devote to the current chapter I'm working on.

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In a conversation I had with a friend, a funny suggestion came up and I took it as a challenge.

The first draft, seven pages, is done. I'll have it up sometime either this weekend or next week.

Here's a hint of what it's about.

Hmm. “Bloodlust” implies a throwdown. Could we actually end this series with a big vampire fight? Here’s hoping!

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Bella and Edward pork all night, and she’s still not satisfied. It takes Edward saying Nessie’s name to snap her out of it. They get changed; we get another mention of how the closet is filled with lotsa clothes and can’t ANYTHING come hard to this couple?! In the middle of changing, we get yet another reminder of how so frigging hot like whoa Edward is that somehow manages to double as a reminder that their sex is TOATELLY GRAET EWE GAIS:

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Bella’s stressing out about everything: the Volturi, Alice’s desertion, the fact that she’ll have to learn how to fight, J. Jenks, the vampires who’ll be coming over, everything. She tries to talk to Edward about it, but before she can get the words out, he’s kissing her. And then she just forgets about asking questions for the night.

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Snide phrase that connects back to the chapter title in some way.

While Jacob and Seth are on patrol, Jacob wonders why the Cullens just don’t take Bella somewhere else, away from Sam. Seth says he’s already asked that; the Cullens have too many medical supplies to transport easily, and collecting them takes a lot of time. This debate takes two whole pages. I hate this book.

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While trying to help Horizon find cover art for his new story, I was searching for "moon through window over bed".

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Moondog got fanart.

I know! I'm surprised, too! I've never gotten fanart before, but I guess you can share it if you think it's nifty? 'Cause it's nifty. It's of the moment where Moondog first takes up her crown. Art by StainedGlassLightHeart, commissioned by Level Dasher.

It's neat. Thanks to both of them!

...And it was one of the most in-depth ones I had there, too. It had a scenario and a short concept written out beside it.

Short to say, those are in use now...

For anyone who might've actually read over those titles, here's the one I yoinked: "Sunbeam".

Short to say, my upcoming story has just received a healthy injection of lore...

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Please, for the love of the gods, stop it. If you're going to leave, post it and then leave, don't hang around for days to weeks and change your mind. Its attention grabbing and lying, if you aren't 100% certain. Like, just take a break or something, don't throw as hissy fit over someone yelling at you, your fic being disliked, or something inherently stupid that doesn't warrant a temper tantrum and you trying to storm out of the room only to be caught by these such things.

Reports of my death have been greatly exag - *shot*

Okay, but seriously, I am so sorry for this long wait. I said "end of March", and now it's mid-July and I haven't done anything. I wish I had a better excuse than "lack of motivation" or "anxiety" or "perfectionism", but I don't. It's just hard for me to get started on something when I can't get the first bit right, even if I have lots of good stuff in the middle.

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So earlier today I submitted a story, and it failed moderation. I won't share any particular details, but it was a crossover between MLP and a certain video game, and I was pretty much plagiarising the entire game in less than 2000 words. I had a sneaking suspicion this would happen, but I submitted the story anyway. Thanks for the warning, sneaking suspicion. At this point, I would like to thank the user Spacecowboy for rejecting my story. It was a giant pile of horse turd, it only took

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I wan't to write, but every time I pull up the editing page, I go blank.

SEND HELP PLEASE.
~Wishy