At times I like to write out random scenes, checking if they have any potential or not.
Many of my stories has started with a simple scene test, and I thought I would share one of these with you.
So enjoy this random unedited scene!
Test Scene.
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The following is a scene from the latest chapter of The Iron Horse, "Television Rules the Nation." This scene expands on the brief scene in the Everfree Forest with the teleportation jump tower being set up by the TechQuestrian personnel under cover of night, but in this version, the Royal Guard spot the tower and investigate.
Reaching the end of Topic List XI folks! Only a few more to go! But before we go diving into today’s Being a Better Writer post, a few bits of news to take care of.
Hello, everyone, and yes, I am posting yet another update concerning the “Writing of…” Mercifully, I’ll keep this one brief.
So, January decided to take a leaf out of December’s book and pass by as if on fast forward. I thankfully still managed to accomplish my goal of finishing the discussion for Ch.11(Closure) by the end of the month. By which I mean, I finished literally on the last day of January. I mean? I’ll take it, but I hope 2022 starts slowing down soon…
Inspired by the video on my last blog post.
Our contenders, the Master of All Evil from Eternia and a Dark King from a forgotten Empire. It’s time to look at their weapons, armor, and skills to find out who would win, a Death Battle!
Hey again, ladies, gents, and fans of an indeterminable nature!
When I think of fight scenes in media, not only do I think of the stuff scene in the John Wick or The Raid series of films, but also of this particular passage:
Cormac McCarthy, Blood Meridian, 9-10
Something I'm wondering about. Would like to hear some other people's opinion on it.
There are two stories. Both these stories have a scene where two characters are talking. However, in one story, the scene is considered entertaining, but in the other, it is boring.
Hello, everyone! As you’ve likely surmised from the title, here is yet another Blog Post concerning my current progress with the “Writing of…” for T.B.O.L.
Skip to 1:50 to see the sensitivity mob getting a taste of their own medicine.
I find myself struggling with this fic alot and part of the reason why is that I am dealing with pure slice of life set-up here and that's always been a weak-spot for me in my writing. Anyways, this scene was removed because i didn't want Sweetie Belle's secret to revealed to anypony else at the present time.
I had thought about giving Silver Spoon a sympathetic character in this story but it felt out of place in my story's setup. Especially with me already establishing her as "A villain" of this fic. Anyways, here's the deleted scene:
"Are you in heat or something?!" Sweetie Belle blurted out without meaning to with a mildly scared yet curious face.
In the most recent chapter of "The Iron Horse: Everything's Better with Robots!" we see Twilight Sparkle wake up from a nightmare and fly outside to calm herself. She meets Gadget, who also confesses to having a nightmare. The two of them talk, they make up from their earlier fight, and they resolve to try harder to help Turing Test.